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for Look Before You Leap

by LadyFlame

person Anni
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! You must write more! Heh, I can tell this is gonna be hot.
person Jessica
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good start! I think I'm really going to like this story. I can't wait for the next chapter-- so hurry and post it, these cliff hangers make me wanna scream :)!!
person Loki
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Giggles* Can't wait for chapter 2.....Go Draco Go! *waves pompoms and grins wickedly* Now I believe you mentioned a virtual love slave ^_~

~Loki
person thehomicidalmaniac777
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far, hope you update soon!
person Anon
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Pounces*

Mesa loves, I wanna read more, Please post....

Love story please post. I really like the plot of this

"love to see you fall i love to see you break i want you to understand that my soul is yours to take. Though lifes endevors you will see that you are the one for me. though death and pain i will gain the key to your heart. I love you now and forever to be, I wish you to see me for me. I love to watch you fall i love to watch you break... My soul is yours to take" C-Z

You've made me need to pee...
person Mewa
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ack! it ended! cliffhanger!! stupid cliffhangers! but alas they always make a person come back for more!....like me! lol Cant wait to read the next chappie!! Update soon plz!
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Lady when you gotta pee ya GOTTA pee!" good movie that line is from. well doesn't draco have an interesting pp lip line. Not sure I would ever use that on a guy but I don't think I would ever be in a mens restroom. Interesting little ditty can't wait to read more.
PAP