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for Look Before You Leap

by LadyFlame

person FlameArchanist
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to be evil and give us cliffhangers for every chapter?
person PrideAndPrejudice
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s even better then when I read it the first time....must say I\'m not sure what would be more painful though, being a guy and being litterally zipped in or being kicked there...my friend found that thought random when I asked her...oh well. Still wonderful and really want to see more of it soon. by the way the quote was from Annie...might have been in the play version don\'t remember. Good Luck!KUDOS
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person ura
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice beginning
person ura
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM

ha ha ha. reminds me \"Something about Mary\"
person ura
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM

cute. update soon
person kaesaku
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. god.
you so have to continue this!
i love it!
the REAL action\'s about to begin~! ;p
person shameNess
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is really nummy like chocolate but i think i have already read this chapter oh well i read it again.
person alosadone
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laugh* yay! Dray\'s finally gonna kiss it better! Must thank that plot bunny of yours! ^^
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are evil!!! I need chapter 4 immediately! That was sooo wrong to end the chapter there! More!
person amanda
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hope there are new chapter msoon