rate_review Reviews

this is such a cool fic. i love your characterizations and everything they\'re just SO believable!! okay this is going on my favourites list. THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING IT.

I had to asy the fight scene was damn good from my point of view. Don\'t doubt yourself so much, and the bloody kiss was an awesome touch ~_^ Keep up the great work!

I loved that chapter, it was so amazing!!!! I hope to read more soon, the story is wonderful

I haven\'t read far, but I do have a comment on technicalities. In the muggle, medical sense, saliva does NOT help cuts heal. In fact, it can make it worst. The reason that licking a cut makes it feel better is becase it helps to dislodeg any solid objects in the wound. Saliva and the human mouth are the two dirties, bacteria/germ filled places of the outter body. The only place that is more unsanitary is the intestines. I don\'t want anyone to come away with the idea that licking cuts will make them heal faster/better, cause it won\'t. I knew a person who was so set on the idea that she only ever sanitised her wounds with saliva and ended up with gangrene. Just a thing that should be taken note of.

You\'re right, this WAS definately a weird chapter... but it was good... I liked it... It was convenient how you used Parkinson as a catylist to get the scene with Potter moving...
as to the \'wonder if last night was a dream\' then wha?? *might have to go back and read previous chapter for that one*

anywho: still going great!
yay more chapters!

Lol very nice! I love this story... Just keeps getting better and better ;) Please update asap.

Jade

Yeah he read the journal. This is so great I hope that he falls in love with h im just the same, and they have little harry\'\'s and little draco\'s. It would be so cute. SO DO NOT DO THAT!!!!!!!!!! CUTNESS SUCKS ASS!!!!!! But the love thing is okay, in fact I would love to see that, just no cuty pies and honey buns. Remember DRACO MALFOY does NOT do cute!!!!

Love the bunnies that have attacked you!!!

AJ

Well of course we liked the last chapter!

morbid is good! Just don\'t overdo it, and we\'ll love you forever!

speaking of...
BLOOD
we need more!!
and if you mix it up with the sex it\'ll be even better!!

lol, we can tell what attracted us to this story in the first place, can\'t we?

and this was an hysterical chapter!
I loved how Ron kept fainting!!!

and Colin, and Draco running around like that...
priceless!!

Heh heh heh heh!!!
Kill Lucius!
Real DM/HP smut!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YAY!

I\'m liking this...
morbid works, but this story shouldn\'t have TOO much of it...

lets leave the blood where it belongs... IN THE SEX!!
*falls over laughing*

I\'m just teasing, but this is interesting... Malfoy in Griffyndor tower... and the \'die-ary\' in the UNLOCKED trunk, yeah?
...
*sees the possibilities*