rate_review Reviews

This was a beautiful story.

Absolutely beautiful story! The beginning was heartbreaking. I did love Hermione using similar charms to the Marauders' Map. The bit about why Narcissa would have inherited Grimmauld Place was amazing. I love fanfics that exploit plot holes in the original. (As brilliant as JKR is there are still some little holes.) I did appreciate that your Harry wasn't a monster, just a cad and an idiot. I was so happy when I realized who Draco was. The end was lovely and romantic. So glad that Hermione didn't mind being deceived, although it would have been pretty hypocritical if she had. Thanks for a fantastic story.

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How sweet! I loved it!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

itd b cool if you made a sequel. like a one shot maybe about hermione and draco's return to london. and facing everyone and finding out that hermione didnt "abaondon harry" oooh i luv it tho. great writing

So good! The only suggestion I have is maybe coming back and writing an epilogue?? It seems like it still needs to be wrapped up with Hermione going back to England...

omg. i luv it! its so sweet... you should write more DM/HG

This is a great story, you should write and epilogue, if they stayed in USA or went back to Britain..If Harry tried to get her back again..

Excellent story from and excellent writer. Love all your fictions, well thought through and no mistakes.
keep up the good work, best D/hr fiction writer.