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for The Comedy of Errors

by Bylle

person Inspire
schedule June 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Great story. I loved it. Thanks for posting.
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quite romantic, although there were many times I wanted to beat fictional Dumbledore\'s ass for his treatment of McGongall.
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This definitely wouldn\'t be in my favorites list if it wasn\'t damn good writing involved. Well, that and a healthy amount of really good sex scenes. Hot! *Fanning self*
person eppes
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Totally hot and romantically brilliant. I can only hope Rowlings has them become a couple in the next 2 books.
person dragonlady sakura
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing writing. I must add this to my favorites list. I hope you write another story soon.
person Excel
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT is what a great story should be like. Everything was brilliantly detailed, well thought out and structured to perfection. It made one fine piece of fiction. Also, it was hot as a mutha! Lol. Never stop writing!

****Excel ****
person emancipationjones
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What?! It\'s over? Already? Nooooooooooooooooo! Damnit, I just started reading this. Anyway, usually old people having sex is soooooo gross to me, but the writing was so sexy I could overlook it being Dumbledore and McGonagall. I kid! Fantastic love story.
person tdk
schedule March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Claps loudly* Bravo! Brava! This was a pleasure to read. Minerva and Albus have never seemed more real and interesting. Loved it!
person Sano
schedule March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was awesome. I must go reread this again and again! I hope you post another story involving this couple again real soon. Bye!!
person Tinkerbell14934
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate to say this but you suck. Your writing does not but you do. Have you read witches and wizards? until you do do not flame her and not tell her. okay?