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January 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I feel the story has further potential. Hope you can add yet another sequel!
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! Fantastic smutfic, I love it!
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, well i don\'t know what the heck is wrong with me but i love this concept. thats so messed up but this story and its prequel are two of my favorites on this site. that just goes to show how twisted i am i guess.
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November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that's aastiastic story to introduce yourself with. The structure is well constructed and you have a clear writing syle. The story is kind of creepy, but then Snape and Hermione are both being very strange creepy characters here so it all fits quite well.
I'd be interested to see what you do with a longer story and deeper plot. I think you're writing is well suited to that kind of long emotional edge that creates long term conflict or exists alongside larger plots.
I'd be interested to see what you do with a longer story and deeper plot. I think you're writing is well suited to that kind of long emotional edge that creates long term conflict or exists alongside larger plots.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT. I LOVED IT. PLEASE CONTINUE I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - for your "very first SS-HG fic" this is very nice! You could easily continue, even if it's just one more chapter. "wondered if he'd ever let her stay" - so Ch2 could be follow-up or just epilogue, like a year later, after he asks her to stay after graduation - after he asks her to stay and become his potions apprentice - after he asks her to stay and marry him. They can still play "Professor & Head Girl" games!
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wish you had wriiten more. Please update this story. PLEASE!!!
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just want to congratulate you on all three stories. Interesting to say the least!...Message me on quizilla when there's something new out!
Cheers, ~*~*Wol*~*~
Cheers, ~*~*Wol*~*~