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I am really enjoying this story - keep up the good work. The plot is gripping. I enjoyed Sev\'s bath scene :)

I am really enjoying this story. Please continue!

Fabulous chapter. I am really looking forward for the upcoming chapters.

Such a great story. Looking foreward to the next part.

Ch 18 - I like your Mrs Bigelow and hope to see her again, perhaps to employ Severus when he goes legit. Ginny seems to be unleasing her Slytherin side, and I hope she is saving her money for when she gets free of Harry (or kill Harry??). I wonder when Hermione will quit waiting for Ron the Weasel. What\'s this situation with Lavendar - have the boys told her yet that they are escalating their escape plans? What ARE Lavendar\'s plans for Hermione?? And when will you tell us about Severus\' late wife?? More, please!

OMG! I\'ve just read all 17 chapters today. I was entirely gripped. Please continue, this is great stuff. The way you write about Muggle London and the Wizarding world and the general lack of trust between people makes me consider that it is easier for magical folk to lead a double life than us. Trust is even harder to come by for them than for muggles because everyone has a magic trick up their sleeve.

I am reminded a bit of 1984 - the need to get away to a room where you can be yourself and being prepared to take enormous risks to do so. I\'m so looking forward to the moment when Severus reveals himself to her - what\'s he going to say, just before he removes his mask?

So far I am LOVING this tale. But I must add this... AAARRRGGGHHH!!! PLEASE don\'t leave it hanging for long! I just came upon the story tonight and became rapt... and now I\'m just itching to see what comes next. Please please please end the suspense soon:) Excellent work, PLEASE keep it up.

Oh. My. Gods.

I started this fic thinking it was going to be dreadful. I mean, think about it. Reading the Rowling books, the very idea of Snape as a gigolo is ridiculous, no?

Wow. I\'ve only reached chapter 8 and already I\'m blown away. You really know a lot about how a bad relationship makes someone feel, and I hope you don\'t mind my saying that this knowledge comes from friends telling you about it and not personal experience.

You also do sexual frustration well. Many, many kudos. I guess it just goes to show that a good author can make even a silly premise into a good story. Please do keep it up. It\'s not often that I review a story, even a story I like, and it\'s VERY rare that someone on here exceeds my expectations.

Best of luck to you and your family (I think you said you have kids? I have a daughter who\'s now 18 months...) from your fellow author, Wolvertique!

Yet another wonderful chapter! I loved the bit about Umbridge -- makes perfect sense. Good way to include some actual canon in your fanon! ;-) I liked the healer named Cheval, too. And Hermione\'s reviewing her relationship with Ron is so perfect. She *would* look at it analytically, almost clinically, wouldn\'t she? Keep up the great work!

excellent chapter. i didn\'t really expect ron to come back so no disappointment so far there. what is ginny up to? seems she has an idea. hmmm interesting. alright, it\'s time to see some ss/hg action! espeially now that she\'s considering leaving ron. he doesn\'t deserve her anyway. every one is right. she deserves some one intelligent and wonderful to match her brilliant mind. either snape or lupin, take your pick. frankly i like them both. anyways, keep up the good work and update soon!

much love