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person Dmeb
schedule August 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I've just caught upon reading this epic from the start, ready for the latest chapter! 

I have to admit, I'm intriguiged by the lemons (fruit) and the appearance of two manifestations for Hermione as there was for Severus; is there any significance?  I'd like to know just what is going on with Moody, as there is definitely something very odd.  Hopefully things will become clearer, with Severus and Draco getting justice, once the election is run (barring the unthinkable, and Fudge getting another term). 

The only other thing to mention is I thought you were talking about real snipe in this chapter (http://www.rspb.org.uk/discoverandenjoynature/discoverandlearn/birdguide/name/s/snipe/index.aspx) and so it took me a while to catch on to the joke :D

person Fox
schedule July 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Dear Betz,

Chapter 82. It's lovely to read another chapter from you. I always try to check this story every few days :-)

It's coming along very nicely. It was funny when Hermione told her family, she's a witch :-)

And of course poor, poor Blaze. But if it's the same person, then they should already know, as it's known, who Pansy's killer was. Moody should be gotten rid of, vindictive old bastard. 

Hermione get your arse to work! Betz don't distract her.

Thanks, Fox xx

person Anonymous
schedule July 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love the story, I hope there's a reunion soon, and the Hermione figures that those lemons and it hopefully will have something do with clearing Snape/Draco's name. I think it would be a great twist if Moody was a closet death eater. Keep up the great work!! 

person Fox
schedule July 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hi Betz, 

Chapter 81. Great chapter, I enjoyed especially potions masters "socialising" event :)

It's very sad, what happened at the end of the chapter, very scary too. 

Please let Hermione start proper investigation already, before they both go mad without each other. 

Thank you 

Fox xx 

person Fox
schedule July 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Betz,

Chapter 80.

I'm glad to find Hermione is beginning to discover things at last. I was very anxious to see the story moving forward. 

It's good to see Severus settled and doing well despite sexual frustration...poor Severus. I would gladly help ; -)

Thank you 

Waiting for more 

Your Fox xx 

person Anonymous
schedule July 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I love love love LOVE this story.  Even if you posted a new chapter everyday, it still wouldn't be fast enough.  Keep up the great work!

person Fox
schedule July 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Dear Betz,

Thank you for the update, I was away for some days and it's nice to come back to it.

It's very nice to see Severus' business working well. Birthday thing (Hermione's cake) was a bit sad and Harry thing (marriage), well...crazy, but good :-)

I wish Hermione would find the pensieve and start the investigation already, I'm bit impatient now and it seems as if the story isn't moving forward much. Please hurry up Betz, I need some action.

Your Fox

xx

person Fox
schedule June 29, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dear Betz, Thank you for this update. ........................ Favourite moment of mine was when Severus said, that he had hundreds of teenage witches in his house staying up all night. Hahaha...........I can only imagine their faces........ And when Akela decided, that he must have been the nicest teacher at Hogwarts................ Very funny indeed. Ohhh. Thanks again. Your Fox xx
person Fox
schedule June 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Dear Betz, Chapter 76. Ginny and Draco's wedding was amazing, simple, romantic, full of love, stress free and with a wonderful surprise. I believe that (if I ever got married again ) this would be my kind of wedding...ohhh i feel all dreamy now. And I really feel for Severus, but I don't think you are a cruel type to deny them. Lavender and Ron's wedding was so much different, but I'm happy for them. Now. Hermione's christmas gift....that situation made me scream in frustration! Honestly. I can't wait for another update and I thank you for your continuous hard work to provide your written delights.I'll go now. Thank you Your Fox xx
person Anonymous
schedule June 24, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This story has been lagging since sever us, gunny and Draco left for sanctuary. I find myself skimming the chapters because it is not as interesting watching all this stuff happen that has nothing to do with the Hermione clearing Severus' name.I am hoping a reunion or time jump happens so we can get to more important plot points!