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Wow - I am so loving this. I can\'t wait to read more. No wonder Hermione is so drawn to Sev - the way to a woman\'s heart is through her stomach! Sev is really smooth, I\'d be all over him, I\'m sorry to say. Poor Ron - you\'ve made him so unloveable so far. OK, so Ron\'s a really crap shag but he must have SOME redeeming quality, surely. After all, he had a very stable upbringing in a loving family. I\'m sure that your next chapter will need to deal with HG\'s guilt over not telling the aurors about Delahov but I hope you will have time to get Sev to prepare his cassoulet and slowly feed it to Hermione, mouthful by mouthful. Fwoar!

yay! glad i snuck over here to have a read. mauahhahahaha.... lovely chapter (as always). I really enjoyed the \'finger job\' (good lord! lol where did that come from?). damn ron..... now she\'s going to feel bad ? and aha! i thought dolohov was up to something odd.

I\'ll review when it goes up on Ashwinder! Very nice...just leaving me wanting more! Please hurry..... ~Gin

Of course I couldn\'t wait for Ashwinder, so came here to read. THat was the hottest finger sucking scene I\'ve ever read!! And I wanted to beat my head against the wall at the end of the chapter...oh man...great chapter, loved it, so good! And Callo\'s advice was perfect!

Ch 19 - groan.... now she\'s going to feel guilty and emotional and try to get back with Ron again. Ugh! And he\'ll want to know where she was that night, so she\'ll feel guilty about that, instead of wondering where RON has been this week (and with whom). I\'d think Severus would be smart enough to never use the word \"client\" with a client; something like \"special friend\" sounds more like what a gigolo would say, to make his ladies feel special. Although \"client\" would be okay for a massage client like the nice lady who is moving away. Hmm, does Dolohov\'s insanity mean the Ministry will be even more stringent with Death Eaters like Draco and Severus? You\'ll tell us about their meeting with Kingsley in the morning? I can\'t believe I actually like this angsty story....I hate angst.... need more fluff and romance! Please hurry, write faster!!

Love it!!

I am truly enjoying this story of yours that is unfolding before me. I would like to make a small request.
I was wondering that before you have your charater reveal that he is indeed the infamous snarky man of black and potions.
You could have the two of them involve themselves in a bit of role play for Hermione. Perhaps by her fantaziing about her Potions Professor. I was thinking of something along the lines of her perform something on herself in fornt of him, all the while he is guiding her in her self exploration, and calling out \"Serverus\" in an all to ilicit way.

Your the author, but I was makig a slight request.... ;)

I am truly enjoying this story of yours that is unfolding before me. I would like to make a small request.
I was wondering that before you have your charater reveal that he is indeed the infamous snarky man of black and potions.
You could have the two of them involve themselves in a bit of role play for Hermione. Perhaps by her fantaziing about her Potions Professor. I was thinking of something along the lines of her perform something on herself in fornt of him, all the while he is guiding her in her self exploration, and calling out \"Serverus\" in an all to ilicit way.
I know this is your baby but I thought that this kind of scene could break Hermione\'s cycle of sexual frustration and she wouldn\'t physically cheat on her husband, though I have a feeling that he is seeing someone on the side(of the Moon being a guess?).

I also loved the way you tyed in Umbridge by the way of Fudge\'s wife, how approprieate!

I really enjoy \'seeing\' Albus and Minerva in Severus\'s rooms. I think that is a really important touch, they keep him grounded or something to his past. This is a really good fic!

another great chapter. i can see though that darling severus is going to have more feeling\'s for hermione than even he anticipates. not only in a sexual manner. i believe he can see her as his mental equal and will find that arousing. which in all honesty it is. a conversation with some one who knows what they\'re talking about and can share their ideas and opinions with you is very \"stimulating\". anyways, great chapter. i have to question lavendars real reason for not accepting the fee. maybe it is a bit of pity mixed witha bit of thanks. but also some thanks for future events as hopefully hermione will help draco and severus get out. btw, i do hope hermione goes with them when they leave. that would totally rock! alright, get to writing hun, i\'m anxious for more!