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Great chapter. So now Harry knows what an ass Ron has been. Looking forward to the next chapter. Soon please.

I really like this story. I can wait to find out what little witch Ron has taken up with, because that is the only way Hermione is ever going to leave him. Is it one of the player\'s girlfirend or player\'s wives\' friend, like they fixed him up with her becuase they hate Hermione?

Ch 22 - okay, add Mr Nettleton to the hit list - him, Ron, Harry, and Moody into the oubliette! NOW! Was Lavender irritated at Severus and Draco at first? Scary, the idea of Lavender turning against them.... I\'m glad Hermione didn\'t back down from her ultimatum to Ron about divorce or counseling; I was afraid she would, until the wine gave her enough gumption to demand counseling. Although I doubt counseling can make Ron into a better man. Her mum should\'ve told her that there are marriages that can\'t be saved because they shouldn\'t have ever been. Bummer... Hmm, you could cheer me up by writing a lemon with Severus \"directing\" the made-for-Pensieve scene with Mrs Nettleton, Blaise (with his own mask), and another wizard. But that oubliette would REALLY cheer me up! I\'m sure St Mungo\'s has an oubliette....

What a fantastic, rivettingly interesting chapter! Loved the dinner-party drama! Ron really is vile and deserved everything he got. I guess there must be more to the Rabbit woman than just a passing irritation to Sev - where\'s this going, I wonder? Keep up the good work.

Thank you for a wonderful and compelling read. I can\'t wait until the next chapter comes out. I\'ll be on tenterhooks until then. Keep up the fantastic work and please lock Moody into a wardrobe containing an abnormally large and rabid blast-ended skrewt for me!

another awesome chapter. i can understand hermione\'s guilt here. it\'s basically the same guilt we will see in harry in the coming books. i think shacklebolt telling her that other people had felt the same helped out a lot. ahh how i love an unimtimdated snape. moody has no idea does he? for his insesint preaching of \"CONSTANT VIGILENCE\" he could practice some himself around snape and malfoy. boy he is an ass hole though isn\'t he. parannoya at it\'s worst! as for this converstaion ron wants to have. please don\'t let it be an \"i\'m sorry, let\'s have sex and make up\" that hermione accepts. i really want her out of this marriage. it\'s so stifling and she can finally feel it. granted, it would be hard to do if snape were not free to go, but it\'s going to be a while yet. i think hermione needs to feel free for a while and not rush right from one horrible marriage into a relationship that could be potentially deadly (imagine being caught on the lamb by the likes of moody. ugh). anyways, i leave you here and hope to see a new chappie soon
much love!

Excellent chapt as usual.....*doing her best to paitently wait for the next one*

Love this fic. Glad to see the update, will be looking forward to more soon please. And yes I much agree that especially Alaster should die, or at the very least a swift kick in the butt.

Moody was the spy wasn\'t he?

Ch 21 - okay, if you won\'t kill Harry, Ron and Moody, how about an \"accidental\" Dementor\'s Kiss for them? Sheesh, what a lech Moody was, asking about Severus\' clients - clearly an invasion of his employer\'s client files (Lavender\'s). Umm, it\'s okay if the aurors discover that Severus went to Lavender\'s company, where he is not needed as a gigolo? Hermione is really going to cave in and let Ron come back, isn\'t she? Sigh... I hope she at least has the nerve to tell Harry to go home early. I actually feel bad for Macnair, being harassed with a surprise inspection and then arrested; are he and Zabini also among Lavender\'s gigolos? Triple-rations of butterbeer for Dheef and Marf and your betas! And a prize for Shacklebolt; what an awful job, working with Moody.