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Too bad Ron is being such a prat! I am guessing he was at Lovely Lavender\'s house the week he was gone! That would explan so much of what is going on. I wonder how she inserted herself in his life - - - like she did with everyone else in the story! And I have been wondering if she will really let Draco and Snape go when their plans are finalized? Not sure if she would double cross them, but she seems to have a lot of influence in a lot of high places!

So they are back at one anothers throat. And Severus is having nerves. Looking forward to the next part.

Brilliant, as always! Trevor Spawn...damn that had me ROFL! Absolutely perfect! How many more chapters until their \'date\'? Hmmmm? Oh! You mean it\'s the next chapter?!!? YAY! All of griping will soon be over....well, that is until I have to wait for the NEXT Thursday night \'date\'! HAHAHA! Are you tired of me yet?

Ch 24 - how will Hermione get rid of Wonder-Boy at work? Sheesh, she\'s got nothing nice in her life except Calleo. When will she figure out that she doesn\'t really want her marriage to continue?? BTW, thanks for the raspberry dressing recipe!

Ch 24 - PS - would Ginny object if Hermione and Calleo did fall in love? WHY would Ginny be so interested in saving her brother\'s marriage???

So, I\'ve read this entire story so far and I simply HAVE to tell you now how much I am loving it. It\'s wonderfully drawn out in a way that makes you WANT what is {hopefully} inevitable. I have recently become more and more interested in the whole Snape/Hermione ships and actually find them quite intriguing. Yours is one of the few stories I\'ve read that I\'ve felt good enough to share with a friend by giving them the sight. You write very well, by the way, and I don\'t simply mean punctuation and spelling. The way you describe the characters and their feelings concerning things is quite realistic in my mind. Please keep writing. And I hope your baby, if a baby he or she still is at this time, is doing well! ^_^ Have a wonderful day whenever you happen to read this.

Another wonderful chapter. Poor Lavender, I had wondered what had happened to her to make her so cool and quite dispassionate. I hadn\'t thought it was something so terrible though. Please add Macnair to Moody\'s wardrobe via a hard kick up the backside with a stiletto heel! I don\'t know why Ginny is so worried about Hermione getting attached...how can she not see that Sevvie is in the greater danger of being so! I will try and wait patiently for the next chapter and keep reminding myself that you and your betas have lives outside of providing great literature for the masses. :)

Excellent! This is nicely paced and very enjoyable to read. It\'s easily one of the most well-plotted NC-17 fics I\'ve ever come across, which is refreshing when you consider that PWP seems to be the norm. You\'re doing a good job of keeping us in suspense and releasing little bits of information at a time. In this chapter, I liked Hermione drinking all that wine (as if she ever would-!), the conversation about her at dinner, the guys quibbling over how to make a cassoulet (yes, I\'ve seen Gigi many times but do not remember that line), and the way she chose flowers based on their meaning. And the last paragraph was hysterical! One of the best chapters so far; great job! :D

Ahh come on now, just a little hint? I believe that she should tell Ginny, maybe at the spa. i know it\'s extremely hypocritical of her after the way she tore through ginny, but i think that ginny will be accepting, especially since they need her help to escape. i can\'t wait to see hermione\'s reaction to this whole plan. makes me curious considering her current behavior. i can see ron becoming an ass again and then severus proposing his plan and hermione BEGGING him to take her with them (mmm, little cliche there!). is it apparent that i\'m not rooting for ron in this one. i\'ve never been a big ron fan in canon or fanon. he\'s just got too much middle child syndrome going on for me. anyways, great chapter. can\'t wait to see another!
much love!

Ch 23 - a roller coaster of a chapter... the downer of finding out what happened to Lavender and Parvati, the flowers reminding us of the dead ... then the funny, with Severus demanding his guests eat dinner NOW (what, no dessert involving chocolate syrup, cream, and honey?) and the cassoulet wars. Forget Severus the Sex God - I want him to come over and COOK! Mmmm.... duck.... Ironic that Hermione tries to save Ginny\'s marriage while Ginny tries to save Hermione\'s marriage - and they BOTH need divorces. So does Lavender give Blaise any special favors, since he helped her escape? Thanks for the new chapter!!