rate_review Reviews

Happy Birthday to them both! And still I love this story. I enjoy how you\'ve gone beyond what the books have said {obviously having too since your story takes place four years after the fall of Voldemort}. You, however, have gone further than other stories I\'ve read. It makes it a comfortable and delightful read. Please continue. And a hand to your Betas {I believe that\'s correct, if not I apologize to them} for making sure your story is the best it can be! {That\'s what they do right?} Again, Happy Birthday to both your children and stay well yourself!

Ch 25 - Oh, I so hope that Ron bombs with the counseling! Get rid of the weasel!! Hey, Severus didn\'t send her home with leftover cassoulet.... that would\'ve helped her think of him more often. I like the way he is slowly leaving her clues about his real identity; very Slytherin of him. When will you tell us more about the first Mrs Snape? BTW, is there room in the oubliette for Calpurnia Fudge? And Trevor? You\'re very good at creating characters that incite us to hiss and boo! Thanks for the new chapter.

I still love it. Please post/write more soon. I hope that she\'s not too demanding! ;-) How old is she? I have a neice who\'s five at the moment and she\'s STILL a handful. Anyway, I LOVE this story. It\'s creative, interesting, and makes the reader want more. Please continue! ^_^

Poor Hermione. I almost feel like shouting to her \"Go! Just leave. It\'s not worth it!!!\" Alas, every person has to discover their own route to happiness alone.

I like seeing Severus nervous. Quite endearing. I like how their are slowly progressing emotionally before they are involved physically. Great buildup of tension.

BTW....where did you say you lived? That salad sounds tasty! I might try it out on my kids - they\'re my guinea pigs :)

AGGH - supposed to be \"they\'re\" not \"their\" - typing too fast!!

Oh, believe me I know how how challenging it is to write this stuff. I have three smalll children and a bigger one called a husband that distracts me. But hey, your story is good, keep it up.

I just thought you might want to know this:
J.K.Rowling just updated on her website and said that there were ways a wizard could use Occlumency to block the effects of Veritaserum.

http://www.jkrowling.com/textonly/faq_view.cfm?id=105

I also wanted to commend you on a fantastic story. It is unlike any other fan fiction story that I\'ve read.
Please update ASAP!
Happy Writing!

Hmmm. Good underwear obviously means Hermione would like to progress things with Severus. Her life is so miserable - of course she\'d like a good shag! I suspect Ron may find Calleo\'s note and be suspicious. Spawn is vile (but a very interesting creation BTW), and if Hermione has to work with him she would have to hand her notice in, wouldn\'t she? Especially if Spawn gets the position ABOVE Hermione! I enjoy trying to guess what\'s going to happen in this story because you do set things up interestingly, leaving little clues. Some of the things I\'ve guessed I\'m not putting here, in case I\'m right and that spoils the story for others. However, many of my guesses have been wrong, which adds to the fascination.

Thanks for linking to the cassoulet recipe - I don\'t want to make it but I was interested enough to read the recipe after all this talk of \"cassoulet snobbery\". I like the look of your rasperry dressing though. White vinegar? Do you mean distilled malt vinegar or white wine vinegar? I don\'t know what Canola oil is - can you recommend a substitute? Many thanks.

That last review was by me, Catpower, BTW. I forgot to fill in the name field.

Such a tease of a chapter? I loved it though...but patience is not one of my more endearing virtues.
I still have a feeling that Ron is cheating.....time will reveal all secrets.