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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am FINALLY getting a chance to catch up on this! Whew! Three chapters at once! The peices are falling together, slowly but steadily...but still, we don\'t know where Ron was at. And, now I\'m wondering how quickly Hermione is going to put the peices together regarding Snape? The sexual tension between them is so strong I can feel it...oh, yes, those times...you can look but not touch, talk and smile...but go no further...and there\'s always that bit of doubt if it\'s just you or if it\'s mutual, but you\'ll never know...ohhhh. *sigh* Okay, time to stop whinging about unrequited lust now...LOL. Last three chapters were wonderful, as all the story has been.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amoazing. It is well written, original, and I have become so captured in it, wondering, \"will Snape be caught?\" \"When will Hermione find out who Calleo is?\" \"When will Hermione leave Ron?\" I like the way you made Snape the weaker one in many ways with the probation law. Hermione is often portrayed as the submissive one. I like the even ground.
Please write another chapter soon. I can hardly wait!
Please write another chapter soon. I can hardly wait!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*swoon* The restrained tension between the two of them is just marvelous. I get the impression, with as many hints as he\'s dropped, that somewhere in the back of her mind, she already knows who he is; she just doesn\'t want to /know/ because then everything will change and she needs this reprieve from her life so badly.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story! I love the banter between Draco and Snape...as anxious as I am for Snape to reveal himself to Hermione, I am scared that she will freak out and run away and we will all be a square one. Keep up the great work.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaagh! I can\'t believe Hermione and Severus still haven\'t even kissed! Let alone had sex. And we\'re at Chapter 25 already! Well done for keeping me interested for so long in spite of it. I bet HG is thinking, \"and I wore my good underwear for nothing!\" Thanks for the note re salad.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this has sated me for all of oh...fifteen minutes...MORE!! Am I becoming peptulant? I apologize, but your story is one of my favorite to date. This was an excellent chapter. I truly loved the Dunderhead reference, superb. I atill want to see Ron be the cheater first and not Hermione, that she leaves him then turns to Calleo, but it\'s your baby I am mearly the eager fan.
Bravisimo!!
Bravisimo!!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter very much. These two seem to be wound very tight. I hope they get to kiss soon, but you did say this was going to run in 3 parts so I will wait patiently. Thanks so much for the quick updates :)
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as usual! I think that the idea of Hermione being Snape\'s weakness is wonderful. I love that he always is wanting to touch her, but does not because he will be unable to controll himself! I can\'t wait to see what the next chapter brings!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course I loved it! And just as I told you, I\'m very anxiously awaiting their next \"date\"...because what else can you call it? Poor Severus...it really is a \'date\'. ;-) You have created such an incredible amount of sexual tension here, that I am looking forward to each meeting. It is wonderful. I\'m sitting on the edge of my seat, very anxiously awaiting more! (Yes, I know you\'ve supplied me with 3 chapters in a week, but I\'m terribly greedy!) More, more, more, I beg of you, MORE! Oh, and it would really help if you can tell which chapter # I should be begging for now.... LOL! ~Gin
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANK you for this update! Simply brilliant. Eagerly awaiting more:)