Betz,
Chapter 90. Amazing. Very thrilling.
"Alan bit" even more crazy, than I expected, what a bastard. Good Severus and Draco are already gone, otherwise they would be in trouble (read dead) too.
Severus and Hermione's connection is extraordinary, the way he shared her physical pain...their shared dream was scary and I wonder what is the reason of this connection being made now rather than before. Maybe she reached to him with her magic and pain...
I'm very proud of your Ron, I guess happiness makes people magnanimous.
I have to say, I don't like the fact, that it is the end of season III. It makes me feel like I will be waiting for an update for far too long. Though, to me even one week wait is too long, mind you.
Thank you
Fox xx
Hey....
It's really a good story.... But please put Hermione out of her misery..... I am eagerly waiting for new chapter everyday..... Please please please put Hermione and Snape out of their misery... I am dying to read about some communication between them..... And please if you don't mind post a chapter everyday....
Chapters 85-89.
A lot of things happen...
"Neville bit"...Well i guess everyone has needs, luckily they all (Neville, Hermione and Severus) realised that it was just a quick release and they all want someone else.
Now the "flowers bit" is a major fuck up! And of course Severus' vague note didn't help either. That's a lot of drama for overworked, poor, little Hermione.
And in the end " Alan bit"... I expected that bastard to cause some trouble, but I didn't expect it to be so serious. I mean, he stunned her, so what's next? Kidnapping and rape? Hopefully Hermione will have time to use the pendant from Harry.
This is so nerve-wracking...
So here I was waiting for the next chapter for 2 weeks, then been a bit busy and not having time to check. And I ended up with 5 new chapters to read in one go! !! I call that a treat!
And so here I was reading and thinking, that story goes smoothly with no hiccups and BAM!!! New exciting drama just dropped on me like a stone avalanche from the volcano on Malu.
Betz thank you for this twist, of course I feel for them, but the story definitely gained from it. You know how to keep me on my toes :)
Thanks
A very anxious Fox
xx
NOOOOO! YOU CANNOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT! NOT WITH THAT KIND OF CLIFFHANGER!!
Yassssss.... this was wonderful!! :3 I know how she feels though I'm really surprised that my mother took the whole -have sex when you're ready- thing like, "if you want to do it, then make sure you're prepared " deal but anyway. I was like 16-17 then but I'm happy that thry settled it. I just hope they don't do anything too rash. Poor Sev.. I'm sure he didn't want to put her in any deeper shit, right? If he did, then I get that too though. I'm so excited! So close yet still so far!!
-MzPearlz
Dear Betz,
Chapter 84. And so the life goes on...
The last vial-memory viewed at last, but it was quite sad, heartbreaking almost.
The last memory of the chapter...something else entirely ;-) I believe, you couldn't stop yourself from including a little lemon. Thank you ; -) I needed that too.
But as much as I appreciate some good sex, it brings us nowhere near to any solutions? Does it? I don't mean to whine, but I'm so curious and impatient...
Thank you
Fox xx
I just discovered this epic fanfic a couple of days ago and have enjoyed reading it straight through to this most recent 84th chapter. You've created an elaborate plot that I'm eager to read more of. Your whimsical yet erudite disclaimers are a delight and the recipes are an added treat.
I'm back! Sorry! But anyways on to the review, -whines- but Sev does miss her, dammit all. I'm kinda sad that you killrd off Blaise but he wasn't doing much other than helping Lav (I'm still partial to her.) But anyway. WAHHHH SO CLOSE YET SO FAR -sobs- please continue
Dear Betz,
Chapter 83. Great to see another update so soon; -) I appreciate your writing regime, you're far more disciplined than I could ever be.
The chapter is great. I also thought, the letter was from Severus, damn you fooled me. Severus could really get his act together and write few words to ease her existence, honestly men can be so useless sometimes...
And of course I'm glad to see Hermione is thinking of lemons, I just hope she'll find more time to research the mistery.
Lavender/Draco's (your) idea of new office is of course brilliant.
I enjoyed this chapter far more than previous two. It gave me hope. I'm looking forward to more.
Thank you
Fox xx
I could almost taste the cassoulet and the Amarone wine! I want a bottle of that haunting cologne! This story is a feast for the senses for any reader with a good imagination. The lingering oppression and pettiness of Dolores Umbridge, even after her death keeping Hermione's brilliance shackled in a tedious, low-level job is starting to make me seethe. And Ron? Well, good riddance to him and his oafish, self-centeredness.I hope Hermione comes to her senses and leaves him as well as that repetitive job....As you can probably tell from my comments, I find this to be a great story that has me fully invested in the characters and their lives. Continuing my binge-read now.
--Victoria