rate_review Reviews

this story is so addicting! and i\'m quite discriminating with fanfiction, but i love how your characters are so strongly developed, the careful planning and unfolding of a complex, multi-layer plot, your style, everything! this is a wonderful fanfiction, thank you for writing this, i can\'t wait to reach the end (although i\'ll be very sad it\'s over!) but then there will be future fanfics to look forward to, i hope.

thank you!

I\'ve been reading this one for a while, and I just wanted to let you know how thoroughly I am enjoying it. I can never wait for the next chapter.

I always smile when I see there\'s more of this story. I hope there\'s going to be a break between Hermione and Ron soon. Both of them really need to find other, better partners.

I also hope you aren\'t easily offended, but I believe it\'s haricot, not hartcot. French lessons. :)

You might be amazed at how many people here are offended when someone points out a mistake or typo...I\'ve always thought that it was helpful to point them out, helping the author improve her/his story. But you seem fairly understanding and slow to take offense, so I decided to risk it.

Now, why didn\'t the notion of this party for Harry from Ginny as a \'last goodbye\' ever hit me! I must be so incredibly dense! So---what\'s up next---Hermione\'s parents? I am curious why Hermione has been estranged from them. Has it solely been because of the demanding Weasley family, or is it more? *sigh* I want Thursday night to get here!!! You\'ve added Mondays, but that\'s just more dancing---I want to see Hermione blindfolded for her \'date\'! LOL! Okay, waiting for more---- Ginny

between your wonderful writing and the links you provide, this is a very enjable way to spend my time. Thank you!!

Can\'t wait for another update!!!!! I love this story!!! It\'s fantastic!

You should get an Oscar or something like that for writing so well.
I just love a story that goes slow like this and makes everything
just build. I would really like it if you could e-mail me when you update.
Thanks. ^_^

Now I want that cake and I don\'t have the skills to even make the short cut recipe. Hmph.

And I think Hermione is being entirely too thick. She needs to figure out what\'s wrong with Ron, figure out who Severus is, and start shagging already. hehe. I\'m just kidding, you\'re going at your own pace and it makes the anticipation sweeter. Please update soon.

Wow! I\'m in love! I\'m in love with your story, with the way you\'ve written the characters, with your writting!!! YeaY!! keep it up! I can\'t wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

can the sexual tension be any tighter?!?!? oh but it is so excrusiatingly wonderful! i kept wanting to just scream \"KISS HER!!\" or \"KISS HIM!!\" but, i have to admit, i wanted to do that because it was so well written, i felt the passion and desire and need in my very own soul. grr, they better just get it on soon. ooooh, the next thursday night visit would be absolutely lovely! i honestly don\'t know what to think of severus though. even though hermione is getting to know him as \"calleo\" i think that she will not see the same potion\'s master that she knew in her hogwart\'s years. he is doubting himself way to much here. i think she will see this new person, one that was changed by the war and by his current circumstance. i can\'t wait to see what the marriage counselor has to say about ron and hermione\'s un-love as it were. i honestly don\'t see how they can save anything. ok, and who exactly was miss brown screwing in her office? ron? harry? trevore bloody spawn? oh yeah did you mean to name him the same as neville\'s toad? cause if you did, that\'s freakin\' sweet! he is a bit of a jerk, yeah? ok, great job updating so quickly! keep it up!
much love!