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person Hikity
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Betz, are you reading??? I am so desparately waiting for your next chapter and don\'t worry about the outcome of HP6, it\'s all pretension - book 7 will present us with the solution. Just TRUST!!!
person BotticellisAngel
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wasn\'t going to review until I read the rest of this; but I loved what you wrote about auras and precognition. You were saying in your authors note about how your mother knew something was wrong with your dad. I did almost the same thing with my cousin. He drives recklessly and one night he flipped his truck not too far from my house. His wrist was pinned under it and he couldn\'t get free. I couldn\'t sleep until almost the exact moment he arrived at home and was safe. I\'ve seen auras. Only once; but I\'ll never forget it. They\'re beautiful. Mine was red cause I was pissed off at the time. We were in the car and something kept falling off the seat and hitting me in the foot. I kept getting madder and madder and all of a sudden my hands were all red and I looked up at my mother and she was just glowing a beautiful suneshine yellow. It was amazing. Anyway, I love this story and I\'m going to go and read the rest now!
person ShilohDarke
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! Man!!! Not fair... I got through that last chapter and felt like crying... More ! Soon! Please... This story has me salivating!
person cloverchild
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutley loving your story. I discovered it the other day and started reading. I had to leave for the day, but I got home tonite and read until I read all that was there to read!! I stayed up all night just because I couldnt bear to go to bed not knowing what is going to happen next. I love your writing style. I am so curious as to whether Ron it having an affair on Hermoine. I think that he is! Bastard!! But it would give her extra fuel to leave him. Is she finally reaching her breaking point with him? Will she leave him soon? And what of Ginny and Harry? If she is leaving in a matter of monthes is she making more progress on making him realize that the marrige is dead?

I know book six will be out in two days, and I hope you read it fast so that you are ready to update sooner!!

I will check back as often as I can to look for more chapters!
person Neith
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* <333

I\'m so glad to see this is an active story. I\'d be as frustrated as Hermione if it was dormant. T___T

I love this chapter, even if there\'s only a very tiny glimpse of the masked one. And you were right to leave it as it is, it really helps us to understand the feelings they have. Even now, after something so horrible. (If anything, it makes those feelings twice as easy to relate to.)

I didn\'t mention this before, but I really love how you add the recipes and OOC info on what you\'ve written. :D It really helps to understand what\'s going on, and what\'s happening, for the less intelligent/exposed of us. XD
person Neith
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...it cut me off. >:0

I think it was a good thing to leave that part about the trains in, it ...especially with what\' s been happening... helps add a sort of element and fear to it that we can all relate to. ^_^ I do feel really sorry for Ron though, in a \'you\'re really STUPID\' sort of way.

I\'m so glad to see this is an active story. I\'d be as frustrated as Hermione if it was dormant. T___T I didn\'t mention this before, but I really love how you add the recipes and OOC info on what you\'ve written. :D It really helps to understand what\'s going on, and what\'s happening, for the less intelligent/exposed of us. XD

person Hikity
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s a wonderful story and I am absolutly excited about how our \"gigolo\" potion master will disclose his true identity to Hermione. Don\'t let us wait to long with your next chapter... kindest regards, Hikity
person Snapesmistress
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was frustrating now wasn\'t it?! i would be pissed as hell too if i were hermione. damn, good job though, i really enjoyed the dream, though a bit scary and odd at the beginning. anywho, what\'s up with ron? why does it seem he\'s keeping secrets from hermione and why is he doing it? and WHO was lavendar screwing in her office? i think about that everytime i read a new chapter. anyways, can\'t blame you for waiting until after HBP. i\'m sure i will not take the daily trips into fanfiction (or even check my email for chance of spoilers i don\'t want to read!) until after i finish. i give it two days tops! great job once again and i suppose we\'ll see you in a week or so!
much love!
person jill
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so thrilled that you had updated so quickly. I haven\'t even read the chapter (yet), but I wanted to say that you are a most kind and benevolent author in keeping your readers satisfied. I look forward to the remainder of your story. I like the OotP universe and look forward to visiting that universe even after HBP comes out.
person EsmaKeltin
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such wonderfully prompt updates!
It\'s quite sad to see Ron and Hermione\'s marriage unraveling, even though separating is most likely the best for both involved. Of course, I\'m absolutely miffed at Ron for being so insensitive to Hermione\'s sexual needs. ;)
This is a fantastic story. I look forward to your next chapter, and hope that HBP doesn\'t change the... shall we say... quantity of canon characters. *gulp*