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Ah, updates! Of course they appear when I\'ve gotten busy and haven\'t been checking daily lol.

The plot thickens! You spoiled my theory of Ron having an affair with Madam Rosmerta and getting nervous around Hermione. Ah well. At least Hermione and \"Calleo\" are progressing nicely, and it looks like she\'s well on her way to resolving her moral conflict, and he\'s definitely accepting what he wants and what he must do. As usual, I\'m left anticipating the next chapter ^_^

As always Betz,your work is a masterpiece.Why do you always end your chapters at the best bits?It\'s not fair!It\'s just not fair! *cries*

Bravisima!!! Ok, I am so loving the in depth feelings you have for these characters. Much better than most novels.
One question....It\'s Blaise isn\'t it?

OMG YES! I could hardly believe it when I saw the update, I think I actually triple checked the date before I clicked away lol. I read 34 and 35, poor girls thats just aweful, I started thinking what I would do if that were me, would I leave or not, and that is so hard to even think about, either decision turns out shitty. And that was crazy that she almost killed severus. I really love how you write even when we are not getting direct Severus and Hermione contact you always have something interesting going on, honestly if this fic were 100 chapters my ass would still be begging for more. UGH and the sexual tension is becoming suffocating, the waiting is the best part of it yet I am still thinking damn it Hermione JUMP! HIS! ASS!! LOL Anyhow the whole chapter was great, them falling asleep together, his nightmares about gabrielle, nightmares totally suck I will just say that, I have night terrors and OMG talk about disorientation its horrible. BLA BLA BLA lol anyhow I LOVE LOVE LOVE this fic it is my absolute favorite, please update soon, as I fear I will go mad without another installment quickly, yes I have no patience lol. keep up the wonderful writing.
~*~*~Shannon~*~*~

I\'ve not reviewed for a few chapters, as I find it really hard to come up with coherent things to say in reviews. This is terrible of me, and so I\'m working on correcting this flaw, and so here it is, the rambling review of incoherence. You handled the scene with Parvati\'s rape well - it was just enough detail to be horrifying, but not so much as to be prurient. I can also admire the authorial skill with which you naturally transitioned away without fully answering the questions from the past, even if as a reader I want to shake my fist and say \"But what happened after she fainted? Did Parvati kill herself? Did Ron help her recover and that\'s how come she\'s obsessed with him now?\" Okay, I could probably check on the second one by going back a couple of chapters, and the last one is just my pet theory for her motivations, but still. I loved the further exploration of Severus\'s thoughts and feelings, making him a sensitive person in the best sense of the word without turning into a caricature of The Melancholy Poet. And I about stood up and cheered when not only did he make the decision to unmask, but she realized that she had been wrong. One of Hermione\'s biggest failings in canon is that she\'s convinced of her own rightness - SPEW is a big example of this - and it\'s nice to see that taken into account in fanfiction, with a logical progression to her maturing beyond it. Not to mention the sheer squee factor of her realizing that, not only is she asking the impossible of Ginny, but she\'s being unfair to herself. Hurray for Hermione wising up! The course of true love just got ever so slightly smoother. :D

Oh!!! I love your work! I am chomping at the bit to read more! I love it! I can\'t wait to see how the relationship advances. How will she feel when she discovers it is him? WHO is Ron doing? Will Severus ask Hermione to come with him? I can\'t wait! Write more... SOON... please?

I\'ve been checking several times a day for an update on this fic! I just can\'t seem to get enough. And I\'m so glad to see what was in Lavender\'s memories. Gruesome, but neccesary. I hope the next chapter is in the works. Back to waiting, lol.

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Congratulations on winning! You earned that award. I\'m so glad you updated. I actually was going to write you today, asking for an update, but you read my mind! Poor Lavender. I can\'t imagine how horrific that must have been. I\'m excited that Severus is taking steps to start revealing himself. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

This is the best story ever - I only have time to read on my lunch hour at work but when there is a new chapter of this it makes my whole day, no matter how crazy people are making me - thank you so much for sharing this one with the world and MORE MORE MORE (Please)