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person Catpower
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still loving the story and appreciate the update but I do wish they\'d shag! I really admire Hermione\'s self-control (It\'s not so bad for Severus as he\'s getting his end away regularly with the likes of Miss Anne). I got a sense if foreboding about Ron\'s improved career - he\'s going to have more time for wondering what H is up to now. And surely he will be getting a lot of money and able to buy a \"footballers\' wives\" style house. Will he want H to be come a stay-at-home wife, I wonder. I\'m looking forward to the blindfold scene - I couldn\'t be trusted to keep my blindfold on, I\'m afraid. Will Sev charm it in place or will H peek?
person jose
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry to have called you a tease. I meant it to be a compliment. The build-up is just killing me. And I am sorry to say that a significant other is nowhere in sight. So no release for the wicked. I shall just have to buy new batteries.
Your Snape is sometimes almost too nice but that holds a lot of promise for the end of this story. Your Hermione definitely needs someone nice. No wham bam thank you ma\'m.

Jose
person ShilohDarke
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter... I am excited to find out what is going to happen next. I know how he WAS... But I would like to think that the person he has shown her now will outweigh all the bad stuff after the initial shock. More please... Soon??
person Jenn
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!! Oh I hope your betas finish soon!!! The anticipation is grueling!!! I do love the bit of DD coming through Snape when he talks to Lavender. I still think Ron is cheating on his wife.
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh what a tangled web we weave, when at first we practice to decieve. Yes indeed, when Ron said they found the replacement I was like OH SHIT you better watch your ass Hermione, we can\'t have him hanging around catchin on to your game. I was so happy that you updated this quickly I was just thinking damn I wish this fic had a new chappy and I signed on and Bam there it was yayyyy. Even though we got cut off right before the \"date\" night ahhhhhhhhhhhh lol no I understand it would have been really long (though I would have sat on my ass and read for however long it took lol) I just can\'t wait til their damn dinner lol. Ohhhh and what\'s up with Kingsley hmmmm I really don\'t think he\'s the one she\'s been shagging, as I am still leaning towards Blaise for some reason, but hey who knows. Damn I lost my train of thought, I am wayyyyy to tired so I will just say yet again I love love love this fic to death and know precisely how our leading ladies feel in this, right now my bf is in the other room snoring like some fucking bear and I just wanna go in there and kick the shit outta him, whoops! did I say that outloud damn! lol update again soon I am so anxious for this next chapter, and I think I will email you about the update alert thingy. :) Shannon
person jose
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aren\'t you a terrible tease. Couldn\'t they at least have sex in her dream? I must confess to starting to read this story this morning and all day wanting them finally to have sex already. And now I discover that the last chapter doesn\'t have the release? Write on woman and let Snape finally reduce Hermione to a screaming banshee wanting more more more
person Hanna Delacour
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am not having a good day. I just found my bf of three years in bed with another woman. I could sure use an update, as this fic pretty much sums it up \"and we didn\'t live happily ever after\" This story always brightens my day, and I could sure use it right now.
person tigersue
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So glad you\'ve posted new chapters - I was getting withdrawal symptoms! Really really enjoying this, especially the slowly developing relationship.

Write more soon! (Please)
person Happilyjaded (not logged on)
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH! Betz! What are you doing to me?!?!? Please keep going, they are so close....When are they ever going to kiss?!?! You horrible tease, I can\'t take it! I am too addicted to this story for it to be healthy. Sigh. What an addiction though....Elizabeth
person GinnyW
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that it took me so long to review...yeah, a day can be a long time. ;-) I was surprised that Hermione realized that her marriage was unsalvagable so quickly. I\'m NOT complaining!!! Quite thrilled, actually, b/c yeah, after one marriage counselling session, that can DEFINATELY happen. Sooooo, what happened with Gabrielle? Obviously she\'s dead, but it sounded to me like Severus was choosing for his wife to live, not be killed....did I get that backwards???

Is Hermione going to tell Ginny her revelation?? She\'s been so nasty to Ginny about things lately, condescending, she should apologize! Sorry, been defending Miss Ginny a lot today. LOL! *sigh* I can\'t wait for the next \'date\' night. Then, I\'ll be cursing you after I read it, though, I\'m sure. ;-) Nice chapters, Betz!!!!