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Oh, I am so addicted to this story. I love everything about it... the tension, the anticipation. It\'s delicious. Thank you for writing; I appreciate all of the thought and detail you\'ve put into this story, and I adore how you include interesting information in the A/N section. I have high standards when it comes to reading fan fiction, and I must say that you\'ve raised the bar. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

You\'re right, of course, Betz: Hermione probably won\'t just bonk him next time. If Snape were Lucy, he\'d have some \'splaining to do to Ricky (aka Hermione? Ok, so \'I love Lucy\' parallels don\'t work here).

Anyway, I like that she has a coniption when it finally dawns on her. I just hope she\'s able to look past *her* old predjudices just like Snape did when he first learned he\'d have to deal with her as a \'client\'.

I can\'t wait for the showdown! (which nicely parallels to your little cowboy theme party... ahh, foreshadowing! intentional or coincidental, it\'s fab).

Wahoo!!!! Kill Molly Weasley, the interferring old cow. Burn her, BURN HER I SAY!! Poor, poor Hermione. Poor Snape? Gosh, so excited cannot write coherent sentences. And now to the old cry - UPDATE SOON!!!

YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!She knows!!!!!! Well, with all that occured that evening, I would have had a meltdown as well!!! And though she does seem to mind that it is Severus, she still finds herself attracted to him, right? And having her think that there is more to this than just her seeing him is quite astute, even for not noticing who he was. ;) She knows he wants something other than her.I do think that her find out like she did was a bit of a shock as well and she might cool off, or will she pick up steam and get even angier? You do like to put Hermione through the paces though don\'t you.? Poor girl. As for Ron, you are making him very ambiguous, aren\'t you?
Can\'t tell if he is cheating or not, but he deffinately is not happy with the marriage. It is almost like he he only did it to make his mother happy and what was expected of him. Maybe, he is gay and is afraid to tell his family. I don\'t know I can\'t tell anymore with him. I do know for sure, the two of them are miserable. And Molly should have been in Slytherin. What a cuniving B****! To manipulate Ginny and Hermione to suit her own needs is awful!!!!!! She setup Ginny and Harry into this farce of a marriage. And not telling Hermione of the consequences is just horrid. She knew Hermione didn\'t know a thing about the vows and the consequences of divorce!!! OOHHHH! that really angreed me!! Get Hermione out and get her out now!!!!!!! If Hermione doesn\'t see (after this last bit of information), that Molly will interfere and run her life, for the entire length of her marriage, then she is dumber than a box of rocks. RUN!!! HERMIONE! RUN!!! RUN WHILE YOU CAN!!!

This was a great chapter by the way!!!! Loved it.

Hey, Betz! I finally discovered the little \"secret\" of how to read your chapters a few days early. :-D This was a truly amazing chapter. Just... wow. I REALLY can\'t wait til \"Calleo\" and Hermione have a confrontation. I hope the next chapter is forthcoming soon! Thanks for a wonderfrul chapter! :-D

Holy crap yes! she finally knows. Though it is good and bad at the same time because I have been wanting her to find out yet it takes away from the the whole Calleo thing that I have gotten used to. This should be really interesting, oh I can hardly wait, Hmm I do think that she will show upon monday though, I think she won\'t want to but will end up going because she will defintely want to \"assess\" this information now and see once and for all that is it in fact Snape and really get a true picture with his mannerisms and behaviors, before she decides what her next move is. Ahhhhh I am going to be so damn anxious for the next chapter I am sure I will go MAD over here lol. That was interesting about what Molly had done to Ginny, I would like to see exactly what she did that concerns Malfoy, probably something that helped get him out of the picture or something of that nature I would guess. So I am guessing that our men of the night should be expecting another little ministry visit, damn that Moody, I\'d like to pluck that damn eye of his out and feed it to the fish lol ok thats just gross. OK right well I think I covered everything I wanted to say but I have been up for now....38 hours and my eyes are chasing these letters on the screen all over the place, damn words SIT STILL! lol WONDERFUL chapter, LOTS of info and startling revelations, this has been so great so far and it is just getting better, I think that Hermione knowing will ruin something there but that it will create something between them that is even better than she imagined...eventually :) Until next time, I shall await most anxiously, keep up the fantastic writing. Shannon

ok, lavendar can\'t be doing kingsley!!! that would just be wrong. as far hermione goes, i\'ve had that feeling once or twice in my life. the need to just destroy everything in sight but it not giving you the satisfaction that you think it will. but i don\'t think this will deterr her. i still hold out hope! however dim it may be, i can still hope and pray that they will wind up together right?! keep it up and can\'t wait to see another chappie!
Much Love!

This is the first fic that I\'ve enjoyed the detailed and informative author\'s notes almost as much as the story. You have truly been blessed by the muses. Lovin\' chapter 38\'s disclaimer. LOL.

Compliaments to you Brit-pricker! She is very good. It is a British word and you can have my word as being born and living there its popular even now. As for the story, nice character but a little frustrating. I kept wondering when the confrontation was going to happen. And it ended with no sign of Snape I was gutted. I just find RON so dull! I love the way you write him though, just as he should be. I am a firm believer that RON should never get together with Hermione as she is too good for him. Please update soon desperate for more!

P.S. I normally read and review on Ashwinder but a friend told me you update here fast so hence the switch. Sorry if it confuses.

Boy, Hermione\'s going to be riding the extreme emotional roller coaster for a while, eh? I can just imagine her rejecting everyone around her, then the next moment hugging them all close, then getting irritated because they\'re so close to her!

When/if she thinks about things, though, I think she\'ll realize that the person she\'s been seeing is the person she loves, whether he goes by the name Snape or Calleo or Bodgy Flopkins.