rate_review Reviews

You know, I don\'t think this gets said enough: Thank you for your steady updates. Tough as it is to wait for the next chapter of a beloved story, it\'s truly a wonderful thing to have the wait be only a week or two, rather than months. You do an excellent job of writing both well and quickly, and that\'s a truly wonderful thing. Thank you. :)

Betz,

I usually read and review at Ashwinder, but happily I found the new chapter posted here first, instead. Excellent, as usual. I had held off reading (health, issues in RL, etc) when you first posted. I love all your work and knew once I started, I would have to keep reading. This method has the added bonus that there is more than one chapter to read at a time.

I printed (a few doc apts and time to actually read something for pleasure and not work) up to chapter 34 (all you had posted at the time) and started reading. Continuously. I was not disappointed other than there is no more to read (you knew that was coming - grin). I have thoroughly enjoyed the story and characters you\'ve created. You version of Snape is unbelievably sexy! I love it/him.

They don\'t meet up again until chapter 41?!? I would cheerfully wring your neck but then I wouldn\'t get to read the next chapter or 41 would I? I assume Hermione is currently waiting for Lavender, partially to warn her and then to lambaste her for setting her up.

Have pity, since I can\'t seem to coerce JKR into letting me see the last book\'s notes, let alone that much touted last chapter that\'s written, tell me they argue and then get together, in Chapter 41 or does Hermione get mad, stalk off, only to return again at a later time - prodded on by her mind, Ron\'s attitude, and...Ginny, who I\'m sure will stick her two knuts in. My email is listed, all responses, pseudo-owls, and alike will find me.

Pearle

I love it! It always makes my day when you update.

Right on, excellent thought-filled chapter. I liked how her dreams were putting severus in place of Calleo, kind of letting her see how she would feel knowing it was him doing those things and meshing the two together. I liked how she was constantly putting little pieces of the puzzle together left and right is nice to see that she is finally figuring things out. I wonder who she wrote to Lavender? or Ginny probably. Whichever and I am thinking maybe its Ginny, it should be a good little meeting. With all this anger she has got she is bound to start lashing out at one of them. Man I am just itching to find out!! I cant wait to see what she does on Monday as well has her counciling session, damn I just love drama, you\'d think I would be satisfied with my own but it seems I have to add fictional drama to the already mountainous pile of rubbish I have here lol. You know everytime I read a chapter I just love it more and more if that\'s even possible. I mean the chapters are nice and long, you update regularly, your writing is some of the BEST I have ever seen I am just astounded and it has simply been such a joy to read so far. So with all that ass kissing done I will now ask you to update immediately HAHAHA. I am crazy I know, just a wee bit tired here lol. No but seriously I mean every compliment that I give, you are the BEST! Oh and I just wanted to mention that I really loved Bills comments to Hermione, it was nice to see that someone has finally been observant and not ignoring their obvious issues and pretending everything is just peachy. That was a nice touch and it reinforces the fact even though the couple is owning up to the fact that they have issues and going to couciling it may just be that its getting worse instead of better and now that is starting to show to everyone else more that normal. And I can definitly understand her anxiety about the having kids thing, I swear if I hear one more person ask about when I am going to have kids or when they are going to get a grandchild I am going to become a raving lunatic lol. Ohhh how I do miss Calleo though, damn, see what you have done you have created a character that is so damn good that it makes us totally forget about severus, and he\'s the SAME PERSON! I am going nuts I swear lol. ohhh girl you.are.good! lol I need to get to bed.

Another fantastic chapter my dear as always! I really can\'t wait to see the next meeting between Hermione and Snape. I know its horrible but I really hope Ron is having an affair so Hermione doesn\'t have to break his heart or feel guilty about falling for Snape. Maybe they could simply agree they don\'t work well together and go their seperate ways? lol I know which ever directon you go in, it will still be a fantastic story and it keeps getting better and better and better. Can\'t wait for the next update....but then when can I ever. lol

Wow, this is really good! Very intriguing. I loved Hermione\'s mental arguments. And hurrah for Bill Weasley - sexy *and* sensitive (Fleur is sooo lucky)! Great chapter! :D

I was so happy to see that the day after my review last night there was a new chapter. I know you\'re going as fast as you can, but it\'s still frustrating. Kind of like waiting for the next HP book. You know the story is there, and that somewhere, in someones mind, it\'s done, and only they know the ending and you just really want to know. That\'s why spoilers are so tempting before you read the book.

Anyway, I\'m very happy to hear the next chapter is in the beta que. You know if you need an extra beta, I\'m not very good, but I\'d love to get the chapters ahead of time. Hehe just kidding.

I very much liked this update. So now she knows. Now she can get over the initial shock. But I have a sneaking suspicion that she won\'t cheat on Ron until she discovers he is already cheating, himself. She still has feelings for him, even if they aren\'t love. Part of me hates that Ron would turn into that kind of a person, but being in an unhappy marriage makes people do things they would never think themselves capable of... Excellent Chapter. Update as soon as you can. Thanks!

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I love you and this story, but I am dying here. Poor Hermione. Alas, I cannot review properly. Please allow one more:


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I think I\'ll be fine, so long as you don\'t leave me hanging too long. Thanks Madam Stump, you never fail to disappoint.

please right more... this is one of my favorite fanfics to read i am lost without more chapters your killing me here... please right more