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person Chrisi
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GET ON WITH IT WOMAN!!!! You are killing me, literally killing me. I actually squeeled while sitting at me desk at work when I saw the new chapter and then I read the whole thing while holding my breath for most of it and they still don\'t get down to business! Please Please PLEASE get them together soon or I might not survive and then what would people think? But it is truly the most awsome story I have seen on here - Thanks for sharing it with all of us
person Jessie Deal
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow Betz. First of all, thanks for obliging so quickly. This was certainly better than what I waited for.
I completely agree with you, it couldn\'t have gone farer - but I was howling in frustration by your perfect descriptions again and again so mission could be considered as accomplished.
person Jana
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hah. I found it before getting the email about it. hehe

Still need more. But I\'m okay for now. I can do things to pass the time, like raise my daughter or something...
person Pearle
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off, wonderful title for the chapter. I\'ve always like the elephant reference. Great chapter, the constant back and forth between the two -she knows, he knows she knows, she knows he knows she knows - was very well done. As much as I would have liked to see Severus seduce Hermione, it would not have followed the pace and tone you\'ve set up. I\'m all for lemons, but I prefer them to fit the story and not just jump out at me randomly.


So next up, Hermione with a hang over and arguing with Ron (who I have always thought was an idiot, anyway)? Severus and Hermione meeting again or problems with Moody? If I were to take a guess, I would say we are still two or three chapters from the unmasking, and the same if not one more past that from a kiss or anything else. Great story, I\'m definitely enjoying it. Can\'t wait for more.


Pearle
person Catpower
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 41 - \"And they didn\'t shag happily ever after\"
Aaagh! If you\'d told me before I started this great story that there would be no SS/HG lemon by ch 41 I might never have started reading it. But it doesn\'t matter - there is plenty to enjoy here. I would never have imagined HG to be an exhibitionist when drunk. Goes to show you never can tell. Hope SS doesn\'t find out - I don\'t think it\'s his sort of thing, somehow. Is Hermione finally cracking under the strain?
person cocoachristy
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the game of cat and mouse those two were play...But which was which? ;-) I would LOVE to see Hermione singing I\'ve got a lovely bunch of coconuts on the bar. Tee Hee, get someone to draw that! Can\'t wait for MORE!
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want to steal your brain! I need it! lol I wish I had your talent!!!!! What a fantastic chapter! I am holding my breath as I wait for the next Snape/Hermione meeting. Will I faint before then I wonder......*makes mental note to order resusatating equipment just in case* ......don\'t want to miss the next chapter! Wish I was trained in Legilimency....look into my eyes lol! Keep up the amazing work and if you ever feel like donating a few brain cells then let me know! lol Roger and Freddie need some company up there. :)
person Alanfan
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a cliffy. You cruel person you, keeping us dangeling for the important chapter. I am enjoying the build up though. Role on Ch41.
person Thursdayschild83
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God!! I think your trying to kill us. I have been anxiously waiting for an update and I was so excited to see one today. Thankyou for another wonderful chapter. It\'s been a while since I have read a fic that actually has been checking every day (sometimes three times a day) for an update. I can\'t wait for the next chapter, I love your characterisations and I can\'t wait to see how they interact with one another now that Hermione has (finally) figured things out.
person Koryn
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always! I was delighted to come home from class and see that you had updated. I love the tension and anticipation! I can\'t wait for the next chapter; you are doing a marvelous job. I wonder if that box of goodies is going to make another appearance...