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person Sorceress Black
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hooray!!! an update yes! Wonderful chapter and I must say HELL YES to Hermione cracking Ron across the jaw, that was absolutely fantastic!!!! You go Mione!! He soooo had it coming lol. I really enjoyed the couciling session it was very realistic. I also liked seeing more of Severus\' stubborness in coming to terms with his feelings for her, no matter how he tries to hide from it the realizations just keep coming back to hit him square in the face, the intereaction with Draco in the elevator was a very good example of that. I can\'t wait to see what happens when Severus and Hermione see each other again on Thursday, it should be very interesting to say the least ;) Hmm and I wonder where Ron went after St. Mungos, if he really stayed there anyway, I mean for a quidditch player thats pretty wussy to go to see a healer after being hit by your wife lol. Keep up the wonderful writing you have me anxious for the next installment as usual. :)
person cocoachristy
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just absolutely wonderful! I loved the counseling session! It proved that those two really are not compatable at all. And it seemed to me that Ron does not want to make his marriage work, he just does not want to get blamed for any breakup, and Hermione was just continuing because Ron did. *Sigh* I hope those two soon realize they are NOT meant to be and call it quits and get on with their lives. I also enjoed Severus and Draco\'s conversation. I can\'t wait to see if they run into each other at the spa!!!!
person azulkan2
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo, go Hermione! Just what that prat needed. Hope she broke his jaw. More soon please.
person Neith
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still around!

Your story has me so hooked, I\'ve taken to going away for a longer time. There\'s two or three chapters that way, less waiting! :D
...well, okay. It\'s just as bad to wait like that. But let\'s just pretend it\'s not that bad. XD

I love your A.N.s after each chapter as well, with little bits of triva. ^-^!

Ohohoh... *wriggles excitedly* Moremoremore! <3 Sorry this isn\'t any more constructive, but it\'s a side effect of \'three times the intake\' when it comes to your stories. More excitement, less \'hmmm!\'


(I\'m not sure if my review went through, I did try once before.)
person Sorceress Black
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA OMG \"I\'ve got a lovey bunch of coconuts\" HAHA that was utterly fanstastic I was seriously cracking up, hmmm some of that fairy brady sounds pretty damn good actually lol. So sorry I didnt update last time, my job\"S\" are driving me to madness and I am lucky I can even read a chapter here lol. Anyhow both of your latest installments were wonderful as usual. This inner struggle Hermione is having is so facinating and interesting to read, of course I want her to admit that she wants Snape but that just doesnt happen that fast and I love how you arent letting her rush into anything and having her process all the new developements and feelings. I am also very anxious (of course lol) to see the couciling session, I think this one is going to be the breaking point for her and Ron and being the drama queen that I am, I have to say that I am looking forward to the verbal fireworks. So I will say what everyone including myself says UPDATE SOON!! LOL but seriously please do I am always dying to read your wonderul writing, and I just cant get enough of my favorite fic. :) Til next time.
person D
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! Very real.
person Cassandra
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to tell you that I really debated on reading this story because it wasn\'t finished yet. But now that I have started it I am hooked and can\'t wait for your next update. Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jenn
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooohhhhh, yes the exquisite torture of that you leave us with. Such bliss. I do so love it. Maybe we should call you mistress? Poor Severus, left to self flaggelation, I do hope he uses some lotion so as not to chaffe. And Hermione, oh do hope she doesn\'t pounce on Ron at home, and then gets preggers. That would be just cruel. As you can tell, I am really worried someone is going to get caught in all this deceit and be stuck in a hellish life forever or die. Marriage and Pregnancy is scary enough without all the death involved if you can stand the voice of the guy you live with. I know how she feels, dated a guy just like Ron for five years; constanly putting me down, never being there, left me for anothr girl two weeks before the wedding, best fricking thing ever to happen, took all his clothes outside and ground them into the wet and muddy lawn, and messed up his chronically and alphabetized CD collection and put the wrong CD in the wrong case, took his Nintendo....and he took off after a fight and stayed with a \"friend\" ; his new girlfriend...Still Best thing to ever happen to me!!!!!!....RUN HERMIONE!!!!! RUN!!!!!

Now we know who Ron might be staying with...Rogina....interesting.
person Hikity
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for posting it so quickly. It was a very nice chapter again - especially Sev\'s careful thinking and acting (he is learning, too, isnt he?) and, of course, the bathroom scene -BTW- perhaps I will see the Man behind our Severus very soon (just can\'t believe it until I see him with my own eyes...) but no, I won\'t drag him in a bathroom
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. She tries so hard to convince herself that she can\'t possibly have feelings for him now, but it is still there. I love how you had Snape come in, sit and hold her even after she tried to keep her grief and pain from him. The Snape you have made him become is such a fantastic person! I like how these emotions they are going through confuse both of them. I look forward to the next chapter. Please update soon!