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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Vampire_Exotica recommended this fic to me. She did not, however, tell me how torn up I would be while reading it! HEHEHE...I am on pins and needles. How often do you update? I noticed your note about October being busy for you. Is there an estimation when I should check back for the next chapter? I review every story I read from a scale of 1 to 5...1 is fair (as I do not like hurting anyone\'s feelings) and 5 being BLOODY BRILLIANT!... With that may I say, Betz, BLOODY BRILLIANT!!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh how you love to make me suffer. *whimper* I am currently in pain for not having anything to read.
I hope things are getting back to normal soon so my sweet torturous suffering can end.
Are we getting lemon-AID anytime soon?
I hope things are getting back to normal soon so my sweet torturous suffering can end.
Are we getting lemon-AID anytime soon?
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So you just changed my opinion on two counts. One, Hermionie/Snape fics. Absolutely fantastic. And two, long fics. I adore you and your writing. Keep it up!
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dang! loved the counseling visit. just seeinghermione actually deck ron!! i\'ve wanted to do that for AGES!!!! even in the first books. anywho, of course snapes in love! DUH! how can he not be? he thinks of her constantly, anticipates visits, geeze, the man\'s got it bad. not sure how i feel about him fighting it though. i know that puts him less ooc, hmmm, have to think on that more. oh yeah, draco\'s comment at the end. i really like that, very profound. anyways, great chapter, can\'t wait for the next. take care of everyone at home. and to the beta\'s BRAVO you lucky so and so\'s getting to read the chapters first grumble grumbe. ahh, well. you guys do a great job, far better than i could do that\'s for sure!
much love!
much love!
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BETZ!!!!! I am dying over here, seriously lol. I know real life sucks but hurry hurry hurry. I never review in between for fear of showing my lack of patience but damn it I just couldnt resist this time LOL. I just love this story to NO END please I NEED the next chapter. LOL ok I am done ranting, I shall be patient now. Your biggest fan, Shan.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only stumbled across your fanfic yesterday, and couldn\'t stop reading until I was finished.
Fantastic story, very interesting take on life after Hogwarts.
My only (tiny) criticism is that perhaps bringing your story into the real world (e.g. marriage counselors...) dilutes the magic a little. I know Harry potter is a story based around the ideals of friendship and love etc... But the arguments the couples share and Hermione
Fantastic story, very interesting take on life after Hogwarts.
My only (tiny) criticism is that perhaps bringing your story into the real world (e.g. marriage counselors...) dilutes the magic a little. I know Harry potter is a story based around the ideals of friendship and love etc... But the arguments the couples share and Hermione
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m running out of ways to say I love your writing. Doesn\'t help that it\'s midnight and I\'m tired :)
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I haven\'t reviewed in awhile, so let me repeat. I love this story. I had to check and see if you were spying on me and writing about me, just kidding, of course, but I do indeed love this story. Since you\'ll be busy with trees this month, I\'ll check back much later, perhaps after all Hallow\'s Eve.
Good plot development, great visualizations, wonderful storytelling.
Love your disclaimer too!
Good plot development, great visualizations, wonderful storytelling.
Love your disclaimer too!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, but the best part of all of that was when I called the house and he had his new girlfirend already living there and I erased the tape to the answering machine. Dumb ass didn\'t even change the code to the answer machine. And did I mention he was a musician and he had all these dates for gigs listed on his machine? MMMMUUUAAAHHHAAAWWWWWW!!! Then I called his work and pretended to be her and caried on a conversation with him for aobut fifteen minutes and finally joking said, \"You are so busted..\" Still he didn\'t get it, and I said again.\"No really, you are so busted.\" All with a laugh and lilt in the voice, and them finally I bring my voice down to a rather mean and nasty tone and say, \"You are so busted you fuck.\"
It was the best. You should have heard him bluster and blather on. Vindication I say! Nothing like making sure they know you caught them. Love to see guilty men squirm.
I sure hope Ron doesn\'t have anything to be caught on? *evil grin* And by his attitude, I have to say that he doesn\'t want to be with Hermione anymore than Hermione wants to be with him. And I would find it rather ingenious if say Ron\'s girlfriend, and I\'ll say he has a girlfirend this week, becomes pregnant and has to inform Hermione of this situation during the Anniversary meal.(Yes, yes, crappy timing but Ron\'s is really pissing me off. Is he on Wizard Steroids?) Then it\'s off to have a quick, ok extremely long and drawn out, and possibly angry, or frenzied bout of sex with the sexy potions professor.
ME,a masochist you say? I would never say that, unless you beat it out of me. Be gentle. ;)
It was the best. You should have heard him bluster and blather on. Vindication I say! Nothing like making sure they know you caught them. Love to see guilty men squirm.
I sure hope Ron doesn\'t have anything to be caught on? *evil grin* And by his attitude, I have to say that he doesn\'t want to be with Hermione anymore than Hermione wants to be with him. And I would find it rather ingenious if say Ron\'s girlfriend, and I\'ll say he has a girlfirend this week, becomes pregnant and has to inform Hermione of this situation during the Anniversary meal.(Yes, yes, crappy timing but Ron\'s is really pissing me off. Is he on Wizard Steroids?) Then it\'s off to have a quick, ok extremely long and drawn out, and possibly angry, or frenzied bout of sex with the sexy potions professor.
ME,a masochist you say? I would never say that, unless you beat it out of me. Be gentle. ;)
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And I really enjoy the realistic way that you portray the marriage counseling.
I found it extrememly finny when Hermione let the counselor know that it really is
\"till death do you part.\" And Ron\'s answer to that seems a bit , how do you say,
guilty. Like he has known all along that Herminoe didn\'t know the entire truth and
possibly put his mother up to convicing Hermione to marry him? And she shouldn\'t have hit him
but he did kind of deserve it. I find it interesting that Harry would notice that the only time Hermione resorts to violence is when she truly hates the individual....Draco anyone?
Very Interesting!!
I found it extrememly finny when Hermione let the counselor know that it really is
\"till death do you part.\" And Ron\'s answer to that seems a bit , how do you say,
guilty. Like he has known all along that Herminoe didn\'t know the entire truth and
possibly put his mother up to convicing Hermione to marry him? And she shouldn\'t have hit him
but he did kind of deserve it. I find it interesting that Harry would notice that the only time Hermione resorts to violence is when she truly hates the individual....Draco anyone?
Very Interesting!!