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And one more thing, NEVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN!!!
If Hermione had been pregnant I think I might have blown a gasket!
That was a bit scary, but brilliant. You know that right?!

I absolutely love this story! I do hope you update it frequently... I just have one question though... Will Hermione go from England with Sev? I know you probably won\'t tell us but it would be nice to have a happy ending (i\'m such a sentimental fool! *lol*)

Wonderful, You have avery interesting plot and your describtions are amazing, it is even possible to feel their mutual atraction, and sometimes the sexual tension becomes unbearable.
So good luck. Waiting for the next part

oohhh two meetings in one chapter! It was great, Severus is being so sweet. Can\'t wait to find out what happens at the spa.

It took me a few days and countless hours, to finish readng everything you have posted thus far.Let me first tell you that you are a wonderful writer. Your use of the English language is refreshing and the pictures you paint with your words are clear and concise. I enjoy the psycological appraoch to all of your characters very much. I love that smutt id not your main goal either. It is nice to read, mind, but I love a good story as well. Being married with children myself, I can completly empathize with all of the different women\'s dilemmas. You have captured the ssue that we women need passion, as well as stability, perfectly. I love this story and will check often for more. Please do update often, I smply can not wait for the moment that Hermione and Severus are face to face with no mre masks. Literally and figuratively.

The runic buns - what a fabulous idea, Betz. I just have to bake them. If that doesn\'t create a talking point I don\'t know what else will. You don\'t happen to have a recipe, do you? (silly question I know but you\'ve included recipes and research before so maybe it\'s worth asking).

Still loving the story - almost shag-free though it is. It shows you are a good writer when you don\'t have to keep your readers interested with constant porn.

(NB: to other writers I\'m enjoying - don\'t give up the porn! It\'s all good stuff)

When\'s the rest coming? I love it, please tell me theres more!

Ok I read the latest chapter a few days ago but I am just now doing my review, I had to pull a read and run as I like to call it lol.
Anyhow I really liked this chapter. I liked the little visit into everyones lives again, you really know how to take our
attention of our lovers and thier budding romance well a little anyway lol. I just absolutely LOVED seeing Severus\' pre-
occupation and his lovesick little haze. I was totally picturing the old cliche of some young girl in love wandering about,
plucking petals from a daisy saying \"he loves me, he loves me not\". And it was sweet and hilarious to see Severus in that sort of
state. Oh and hermione and her dress damn you go girl lol, I just wish Severus could have seen it hehe since Ron did not
seem to appreciate it properly, what a bafoon. To worried about everyone else to see how lovely his wife is. And on top of
it all he has the balls to kick her out AHHH I so would have blasted that door to pieces and kicked his unappreciative arse out
instead LOL. ok ok I shall settle down now ;) just want to say that I can\'t wait for the next chapter as usual but even more now
because the spa day is coming up. Wonderful writing as usual I praise her majesty on the superb job she hath done. lol yes its bedtime for sure lol. Update soon!!!!!!!

I have been unable to read or review until now. I just love that the sexual tension is so drawn out. It\'s just like with a Jane Austen book on film...a simple kiss is translated to something so unbearably sensual, just because of all the emotion behind it. I am just dying for that first kiss.

I absolutely loved the \"elephant\" chapter. I hadn\'t read the title of that chapter and was thinking to myself \"There\'s no pink elephant in here\" She knew he knew she knew...omigod, it was just too funny! Oh, her finally decking Ron was brilliant too. When will she realize the jerk is cheating on her? When, when, when? I want some nasty hexing and...well, I\'ll leave you to flesh out that scene.

I can\'t believe Ron has the nerve to kick her out of the bed! Jackass, insensitive clod! I would love for him to overhear her masterbating...crying, \"Severus\" Yes, that would be very nice indeed. Just thinking about it puts a smile on my face. Or better yet, to find her in a pub with someone cute and famous chatting up to her.

I\'ve fallen for your version of Snape...sigh, sigh, sigh

I do wish Ginny would leave Harry before running off with Draco. That way Harry won\'t blame Draco.

I have to mention that this story is imbued with such detail that I am awed by either the amount of research you have done, or the amount of knowledge you have. (Hmmmm...a bit of Hermione in you, is there? :)

Anyway, this story is simmering wonderfully and I am most definitely enjoying the aroma.

You sure weren\'t kidding when you said Hermione must suffer some more. And poor Severus looses his head as well. There\'s nothing quite as familiar as the thinking of someone else and wondering if he does the same. Very well done, as always