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person Sev's Girl
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When is Hermione going to realize she needs to divorce Ron,
and get knocked up by Sexy Sev? I'm reading as fast as I can,
and I'm getting very impatient. WHEN IS HE GOING TO REMOVE
HIS MASK? So many ?s, but no answers. Great fic by the way!
person BewitchedWicked
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gods. I love this. HOnestly I can't even give a proper review at the moment. I just spent the past three days obessed with reading your fic. So now, I patiently await the next chapter, with much, much anticipation. I love how you are writing Severus. No wait, I take that back. I lurve it. I can't wait for more. Thanks!

~Bewitched Wicked
person Claudia
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi ! I just noticed your story right now and read right to chapter 14 in two evenings. It is one of the best fanfictions I have read so far. One of my favorite HP persons is Ginny and I really like the idea of her beeing married to Harry but not loving him. It is really great to read about Harry not-beeing-the-golden-boy. I am looking forward for the next chapters and again - this is one of the best and most intresting fan fictions I ever read.

I hope you understand my review - english is not my mother language, so keep my mistakes *g*
person Sorceress Black
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do, do do, do do I sing a little tune
while I wish that Betz would update soon
All this waiting is making me sick
for this, my all time favorite Fanfic.

la, lala, lala I'm still singing this stupid song
Hoping that it won't be too long
If only I knew Legilimency,
Then there'd be no waiting for ME. *evil grin*

I can't believe I'm writing this crap
perhaps I shall just go take a nap
where dreams of new chapters dance in my head
and Severus FINALLY takes Hermione to bed.

HAHAHAHA Yes I have truly gone mad. Or either serisouly bored. Maybe I should get some work done
*does a disgruntled sneer, worthy of a Malfoy* lol Update soon girly!!!

~*~*~*~Shan~*~*~*~

person sevs_lover
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Betz, when is Hermione gonna get divorced with that doornob Ron and get together with the very, VERY sexy Calleo/Sev? I'm waiting!!! I love Hermione/Snape fics, so I need some Snape and Hermione!!!
TTYL!
(Just to inform you: TTYL stands for talk to you later. My 12 year old daughter uses it in emails and... well,whatever else 12 year olds use. I know, motherhood can be confusing!)
person sevs_lover
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! It's me again. I just wanted to tell you that when I first started
to read this fic, I thought it was going to be a piece of shit, but I love
the way it's filled out. Oh, and I have two questions:
1. Where are the lemons?
2. Is Ron shagging Lavender? Just a guess.
person Larissa
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this chapter! keep them coming! one of my favorite parts was the mirror. That was brilliant! I can\'t wait for the next update. patiently waiting for more, even though i\'m never patient. i can\'t wait until he takes off his mask. i want to see what their reations will be. i think he should walk up to her at the spa when ginny is off with draco, but that\'s just me. anyway, keep up the good work, and update quickly!
~Larissa
person Kris
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update! This is brilliant, and I live for stories written by authors like you! :D
person Jana
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Suspense! More soon please!
person Pearle
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am always so happy to find your update to this story. They mesh so well together. I would imagine there will be a major confrontation coming between Ron and Hermione. With any luck she will come to her senses and leave him. Nice touch almost making us think she was pregnant (evil really, but it was a nice touch).


Will Hermione help cerate and share in the profits for the new potion that Severus is panning to develop? Will this finally allow her to leave Ron (notice a theme here)? One more meeting - does that mean one more chapter, and then a chapter about their anniversary or do we get to see Hermione\'s decision in the next chapter (Yes, I know I should wait patiently and find out, but I really am curious)? Ginny and Draco - I\'m assuming they end up together in America?


I won\'t push with - please, please,please, update soon - I know how RL can get in the way and how difficult finding time can be. Just wanted to let you know how much I\'m enjoying the story.


Until next time, take care,


Pearle