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I check this fic for updates often. Just wondering when I can expect more. (Not that you don't have a life or anything?!?) But I am on tetherhooks here! Please more soon!

Great story!!!!!!!!! Can hardly await the next chapters!

It has been a while since I checked for new chapters. I was delighted to see no less than 25 new ones. Unfortunately for me, I have now read them all and is aching for more of your brillianr writing.
Love your Severus. Sorry if I cant help drooling over him a bit. I promise I will clean him up when I'm done...

yowsa. Hot stuff. I even teared up a little bit when Hermione was getting ready to leave Severus' flat! It's a feeling I know well! Can't wait till the next chapter. The anniversary dinner sounds like it will be a disaster!
Siren

And they shall call you Queen of the Tease!!!! You are completely evil!! You know that right! :)
Leaving it like that!!!!!!! Can't wait till the Anniversary Dinner. If this was a weekly show, I can hear the announcer now..
"Watch and see Ron make a right prat of himself during dinner!!! Will he chase her into another's arms?
Will Serverus snake his way into Hermione 's heart? Tune in next week, Same time. Same greasy bat channel."

Glad to see you did go into the whole
"Steroids" and Ron issue. Very interesting that he doesn't even think to question
his coaches or trainers. Heck, he might not even care. Just fame and glory for Ron eh? Trying to get that last
bit of glory that he didn't get in the fight? Maybe? We can deffintely say Roid rage.

And to your friend who helped with the toys names; The Junior Assistant was perfect...or is that prefect?
Yeah, yeah I am sooooo puny.

And Ron is so sleeping someone......just who?

Ok, can wait till the next chapter but I have my Lemonade ready for a quickie if need be though.

WHOA! Brilliant chapter!!! It defintely met my expectations of the spa day AND THEN SOME!!! Holy shit I was cracking up over the names of the sex toys. Even before the part explaining the name of the "Junior assistant" I was like OMFG PERCY!!!!!! HAHAHAHA absolutely hysterical. Damn isn't severus the bad bad bad little peeping Tom, and yet still devilishly hot, hell everything the man does it HOT! And WOW I can't believe that the Weasel erm..Ron has become a total Roid Monkey lol, well actually I can't believe it, and its so like him to take crap and not even think about what could possibly be in it. Man, that shit it crazy my boyfirend took that crap in Highschool when he played football, and man was he ever an asshole, you know...come to think of it maybe it wasn't the steroids, cause he still is an asshole...damn did I say that outloud whoops lol. But yeah that stuff is messed up I had a lot of football player friends and omg seeing them in a full on rage was scary. Anyhow enough of that, I am glad you liked my rediculous little poem LOL, what can I say I was desperate for an update and was REALLY tired. Anyways like I said brilliant chapter, its good to see that their desires are at an all time high and that Ron still is the everlasting asshole that he is. Oooooooo I could just stangle the little prat, for thinking of sex as payment for her dresses, why is it men think that way god I could throttle the lot of them. EVIL BASTARDS! lol. ok I think I need a smoke and some caffine so I will leave it here for now and be my usual impatient self as I wait for the next chapter. OMG I just can't wait to read about the aniversary dinner and what happens with Severus, that goodbye was some damn sad and touching :(. Thank you for always having another chapter for us to drool over. Your greatest fan for life, Shannon.

Yay! Here comes the sex, here comes the sex, here comes the sex... Whoohoo!! Okay, musn't get too excited, or I'll pass out before it happens.

Hope Ron's steroid potion doesn't make him collapse. Hermione should have told him he owed her for all the friggin' years she had to penny pinch. Ron's an ass that just love to hate in this fic. Hope his hand gave him his money's worth. Jerkasaurus!

Hold on Severus...payday is coming. (smirk)

Don't worry take your time writing. (I've two children myself) I have grown rather partial to your fic - so as long as you eventually finish.

I've started searching for whatever else you've written as well.

Ron is going to have a heart attack (literally), I can just see it coming... Are these potions he takes legal? Doesn't seem so.

Need More!!!!! Can't wait till the anniv dinner! I hope she has another dress like the one the other night that makes ron feel like an arse, or one he hates so hermione goes to snape. I cant handle the suspence.

I don't read wips, I made a vow not to read wips... until yours. Now I have two. This wicked, lovely, tempting, frustrating, fascinating, engrossing and highly romantic story of yours, and "The Mirror of Maybe". The tension is driving me quite mad. Still, sanity is overrated and the smut is better here. ;-) Thank you for continuing to post and may your Muse continue to bless you.
-- (-|-)* Judith -aka- OdoGoddess