rate_review Reviews

This story is so bloody amazing. Everytime you post I get excited and immediately make a cup of tea and grab something to eat for when I curl up in my chair to read.

The plot, the story, the characters. Everything. Is perfect. The detail you put into this is amazing.

I honestly can't wait until you update next. I hope that someday you publish novels and such that I can purchase, because, damn, your writing is amazing.

Keep up the good work - you've got a fan for life :)

You wicked, wicked woman! Leaving us in the lurch!!! Yikes. Dreamy. *sigh and shiver* Yummy.

BTW... my sis is getting counseling in Military school. She's doing fabulously. She's all of 5'6", 138", and she's ALL muscle. She's thriving.

Siren

I was too impatient to wait for Ashwinder to get it loaded up, so I read it here, and I wanted review. Anyway, I want to smack Hermione upside the head for what she did. Poor Severus. I hope Hermione explains what was going on, because Severus doesn't deserve to be treated like that. GRRRR and I thought we were finally going to get some complete lemons, not just lemon juice (lol). Who was watching Hermione leave? Draco? Ginny? Harry? Ron? I guess it'll be awhile before the next chapter gets posted? Please tell me it won't! I beg of you, on my hands and knees, UPDATE SOON! I love this story so much!!!

*wimpers frustratedly*

WHY!?! Damn that faerie brandy and the little voice in her head insisting it was the brandy's fault.
Poor Severus! Do the fates just have it in for our favourite couple? Will our heroine ever have the ovaries (female balls) to just divorce the redheaded git and be with the man she loves?

*snickers at an idea*
When they finally do get the Polyjuice ingredients and the stuff brewed... I know the perfect disguise for Severus.. the redheaded git:)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! You stopped there? Where is the next chapter? Who was watching her leave? Will Severus take it the wrong way? Is Ron shagging some on the side? And what of Viktor? Do they get together in the next chapter? Where is the next chapter?

*****deep breath******

Okay, great story so far.

Chapter 46- I loved the names of the Weasley's new toy line! Very creative, especially the words used to trigger the charms. The scene in the spa was great. Severus obsessing over Hermione while trying to distance himself from the body massage he so cunningly arranged to give her (my absolute favorite indulgence - a full body massage). I think it was more intriguing when he was watching her but could only see a small slice of the room. It made the scene that much more erotic. And the end, the heart wrenching goodbye at the door. All in all, a great build up to "The Anniversary Dinner".

Chapter 47 - Wow. You're descriptions of the carriage and restaurant were amazing. I could actually "see" the grandeur of the room, very elegant. You definitely painted an interesting picture of the dinner between Ron and Hermione. You could feel their discomfort, the long uncomfortable silences, the lack of conversation, the absence of any common ground, the biting comments when they did speak, and the lack of passion or even affection between them. They really need to pull the plug on their marriage and put it "out of its' misery" so to speak.

Viktor was an interesting surprise. It's between him and Draco as to who was watching her leave Severus's, or maybe Ginny? Great characterization of both Hermione and Severus at the end. I like how they started to move forward, Hermione saying his name before passion over took them, before bringing everything to a grinding stop.

While this has to be one of the most evil cliff hangers ever, right up there with the end of the HBP, if you ask me, it does...feel right. I say this begrudgingly as a writer, knowing that your characters sometimes will not do what you want them to. This most likely would be Hermione's mind set as you have created her. However, as a reader, I would gladly hack into your computer, after hexing you as creatively as possible, to try and find the next chapter. In which, I can only hope unresolved tensions are...resolved. Until next time...Pearle

You are evil...unbelievably evil...but so awesome for getting this out before Xmas! I live for your updates...or something like that...but....oooooh man....evil. I absolutely love this story, I love you're writing--you should do it professionally, if you don't already. The romance novel industry would love you, and so would I. =P Can't wait for the next chapter, and I'm not even going to try to guess who it was hiding in the shadows (my money is on Moody--why? because what could be worse than him, Harry, or Ron?)

*inarticulate noise*

I hate you. I swear I do! You are more a sadist than JK is. I think you have a small power-obsession. You better update this soon, or I will find myself in position of having to find your domicile, kidnapp you and keep you writing in a tiny cell with only water and bread!

Bravo! Wonderful chapter. Great Christmas prezzie. Loved the taut ending. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

I just read this all in one shot, and now I'm panting for more (I know, I know, but is it really so terrible to have appreciative fans?). Will be sure ot read the next chapter when it arrives. :)

(The tension in this is just wonderful....)