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i absoliutely LOVE your story!!! more and soon!!

Oh My God, Its is un fair to stop writting at such an interesting momeny, but I still understand u. Hope u will continue writing and very soon we will enjoy a new part.
Happy Xmass and new Year, all you wishes must come true.

YES YES YES! OMG I was thoroughly excited when I saw not only one
but two chapters to read, HELL YES! Now bear with me here because
I am serisouly exhausted so I will do my best to make some sort of
sense lol. These last two chapters (well one really big one actually)
were absolutely amazing. I think my recent lack of sleep will not even
let me give you the proper praise that you deserve, I mean what can
I say it was brilliant as usual! Holy hell I did not ecpect her to say his
name I read it like nothing was amiss then had to stop, go back, re-read
it and and think "wait, oh shit she has never aknowledged him as Severus"
omg then he rips of his mask WHEW! I almost fell outta the damn chair lol.
I loved all the other characters you brought in for these chapters, it was
great and yes I remember who little miss blondie was, I wonder if she ever
had her three-some with Blaise and the witch her hubby was shagging lol.
Beautiful desciptions on everything, you have such a way with words
that I can actually see it, I just adore the vivid pictures you paint for
us each time. I can't even begin to tell you how anxious I am to read
more, because you probably know already anyway lol. There's so many
questions to be answered and I can't wait to find those answers. Update
again soon and thanks for the wonderful christmas present of a fantastic update!!!!!

Woo Hoo finally found the site with the extra chapters...

Wonderful story. When will the next update be?

Is Ron following Hermione? Or was his "emergency" a set up to get out of dinner early? Is R the other woman? Why did Ron have to be such an ass before leaving.

Will Hermione figuire out what type of "juice" ron is on? Will Victor already be privy to that? Has Vic and Ron discuss Vic getting Hermione so Ron can be free again?

Wished Hermione would have went up to the private dining room.

Will Sev forgive her quick departure?

I thought once those to were in an embrace that the aurors would have busted in... boy oh day that would have made rita's quill curl...

Well waiting for more...

As always you are such a tease!!! I can't..wait..till...the...next...chapter!!
It is so interesting! And you know what I am really never ever again taking to read wip!! :o)
I love your story! I am going to be patient just because I understand how hard it is to write such a good story and just how much time is needed...
And there is this thing I read about you sayng that this is just the begining of the last 2/3 Woww... wait a little... WHAT?!?
This is getting so long, and I must admit that even if it never ends I am going to be with you till the end!
Love & Kisses,
Karmen :o)

Hello, I know I usually review at Ashwinder; but sometimes it takes them longer to put up a chapter than it does here and I didn't want to go there and log in for nothing. LOL Anyway...Finally! Hermione realizes (hopefully Ron too) that there is nothing left to salvage of thier marriage. I can't help hoping that he'll let her go easily; but I know that it's probably not going to happen. I wonder who was watching her leave? Rita perhaps? I hope not. I hope it was Draco. Hermione shouldn't have rushed off like that. She should have stayed at least long enough to explain that she didn't want to sleep with him just to spite Ron. At least the mask is gone and there are no longer games being played. I liked "seeing" Severus lose controll just because of her presence and her using his name. It shows how enthralled he really is with her. I love this story! Can't wait for more!

Perfect! Can't wait to find out what happenes

i didn't mean my earlier remark that way is was just all that tention was getting to me. You got believe me i love this story i couldn't enjoy a a story if it didn't have a good plot. And your story has a GOOD plot and i cant wait till you next update.

Ok.I think you just might be the antichrist of evil with this cliffie!!!
Now he thinks he has done something wrong!!!! And her with her damn
Gyrffindor loyalty!!!! Screw loyalty so she can screw Severus!!!!

And your "did I forget something?" line just about had me floored!!!
All I could think was that Ron might get lucky tonight, then maybe Alan, then maybe Victor...
and Hermione would have gotten preggers because she had "forgotten something".
It would have been perfect if Hermione's mind would have kept those pesky little thoughts
out of her head and let her enjoy herself completely! And if she had "forgotten something" with Serverus;
the better for her and for him. I think.
I know you put those in just to mess with my head, you know.

Hope your Christmas was good, mine is better now that you posted!! And a double to boot!!!
So how much longer do I have to wait till Hermione divorces Ron because he is seeing some
bimbo blond as well as having a girlfriend. I know I asked you a ways back if I could send you some ideas about a story,
but I haven't gotten around to it. Work has been crazy with Christmas and all and I haven't had much time.
Between that and the little one getting sick, I have been working like a mad women. I might still send you somethig soon.

All in all, wonderful hope to see chapter fourty eight real soon.

And I ddi love how you unmasked Severus in this chapter!
Absolutely spiffing old chap!