rate_review Reviews

Wow! What can I say? That was well worth waiting for - not just my favourite fanfic but that was one of the best sex scenes I have ever read anywhere! Congratulations Betz, I will look forward to the next chapters and re-read this one a few times! Many thanks, Tigersue x

WOOOOOHOOOO hell yes FINALLY Hermione gets some Severus action!!!!
Absolutely BRILLIANT chapter, not only the fact that our two finally got thier shit together
and hit shag highway but the touch of sweetness there at the end was lovely. All the emotions
in this chapter were so good, love, anger, desperation, relief and realization it was just amazing
and you had me glued to my seat as usual. Yay! I am so excited about her agreeing to help
him by getting the potions ingredients, I mean I expected she would but I think this will be awesome
to read as the events unfold. Worrying about getting caught, whether she will finally talk to Ginny about
all this since she is now part of the conspiracy, oh and we can't forget about the main question WILL SHE GO
WITH HIM???? LOL I can't wait seriously, I just can't ;) I am also anxious to see what will happen with Ron now ohhhhh you are so damn brilliant we finally have what we want yet there is still so much more for the wanting lol. I will be back as usual checking for updates and hope to see one soon hint hint lol, you rock.

this is an amazingly detailed fic. i love your characterization of Lavander and i think that harry and ron's attitudes are very realistic for their situations. i didn't expect to enjoy this challenge so much but your fic got me hooked. brava

Oh wow, where to begin? Wonderful chapter. In answer, yes, I'm happy now. However, I really do understand the need to build tension (I've taken enough flack for both A Knock at the Door and Dances because they didn't jump into bed by chapter two).Severus losing control and destroying his flat is a great image - it really shows how much she affects him. And the line from Mr Mom -

"Gin?"