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person pickles87
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
thank you for a new chapter
I have a bad feeling that ron is going to explode on Hermione regarding her relative being pregnant
the person in the hospital could be her mother
an death maybe unfortunately her aunt had pregnancy complications
so sad
waiting for more
pb
schedule December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! I feel sorry for the therapist lol
person maj
schedule December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read wips. I am that impatient. I prefer reading the whole story in one sitting.. but you got me hooked :-) this is probably the first WIP I've monitored since I found this site early this year.thanks.
schedule December 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh cliffffyyyyyyyyyyy..... I rolled all the way to this point and went to hit "more" and .... now I'm stuck waiting with the rest of the lot! Heh heh, well, that's alright. I'm really enjoying this fic and look forward to the continuation of the story.
schedule November 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter, keep writing!
person DinaTheCat
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! The Sirens' Secret doesn't open until the day after my birthday :-( I'll just have to make a wish list for Christmas instead :-P
schedule November 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter
schedule November 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say WOW!!! I've read this whole thing in the last week and can't wait for more!!!!
person iloveHGDM
schedule November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have spent the last few days reading this story in my spare time. I love your characterizations and the intrigue you weave. You have kept my attention through 52 chapters of a story that I normally would have looked over since I don't usually like adultery stories. That said, I have to say that in chapter 51 when hermione suspects Ron (SPOILER) of being gay - you go from shocked to homophobic gay bashing very quickly. I understand her reaction would be complicated but to turn to that kind of hatred and derogatory terms was hard to swallow considering Hermione always champions the underrepresented. I think you should look back at that chapter and re think some of the words you use.
However - aside from that I have found no fault - and I look forward to reading the conclusion of the story.