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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person destiny black
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn that lucius.hmm,i thought draco was good under it all.
person Bambu
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a great lead in to a climax. Well done. Harry comforting Draco was nice to see, even though I\'m not a Draco/Harry fan, and not that it\'s where you\'re going. But it was still nicely wrought. Poor Severus, I hope Draco can really save him. Your next chapter should be really action packed... and poor Hermione has only had crackers on her poor pregnant tummy.
person NobisSolomNon
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the hug, I\'m doing alright. I enjoyed the update. Can\'t wait to see more soon! You\'re story really is a picker-upper!
person Beth
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m crying!!! I *need* to know what happens next!!!!! It\'s so goood!!!!!!!!
person lydia
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good. I am on the edge of my seat waiting to see what is coming next. Please keep the updates coming.
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Does a little dance to show how happy I am that there is another chapter so soon.) No, get him out quick, you cant let him die! Please let there be a happy ending, you will make me cry if there isn\'t, and I know you don\'t want that on your conscience. Lol. I\'m dying to know how they are going to get him out, I\'m racking my brain but I cant think of a single way they can do it without setting the alarms off. As always, your story exeeds expectations. xx
person ChevyBaby
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 more chapters. Yay! I\'m beginning to wonder how I miss one post in every two? But it means that I get two doses of Severus/Hermione goodness and no evil cliffie in between ;oD You deserve all the positive reviews you get for this story... If push-comes-to-shove, expanding the doorframes won\'t hurt ;o) Hehe! I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for updating so soon
person Semperputus
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more soon I implore you make Draco see the light Hermione can talk to him make him see. Draco just needs to see the light I beg you and poor Severus he must be going Frantic hope to read more soon
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still enjoying this more chapters please