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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person Maela
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Excellent story! I just read 33 chapters in one sitting. Do update soon. :)
person Em Conway
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was reading your story for the first time tonight. I read the following passage and soda came out my nose. roflmao
\"Him and his bloody lemon drops. Severus wondered briefly what would happen if they suddenly stopped manufacturing them. Albus would probably become frail, weak and powerless. They were very probably the source of all his powers.\"

Enjoying you story greatly,
Em
person Wicked Loki
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good grief! I started reading your story today, all 33 chapters in one go, and I just have to say that you left off in a horrible cliffhanger! Evil, very evil. Excellent story.
person MJ
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It\'s funny actually because I have NEVER liked the Hermione/Snape pairing before. I always found it gross and a little disturbing but this one drew me in from the start. I have to read more. The cliff-hangers are killer. I understand them because I am also a writer and I understand the need for them but I still hate them and chapter 33 was the worst one yet. Is something happening between Harry and Draco? That kiss was interesting. Also I have to know that they save Snape. The baby girl needs her daddy, Hermione needs Snape and he needs to feel like he is needed and useful. Please update soon before I go crazy!

Love always,
MJ
person Avery
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!!!
person Bambu
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re one of my frequent checks on this site, I\'m always so happy to see an update from you. I\'m thrilled that in this last chapter you didn\'t de-claw Draco. Very, very well done. And, I also like that Harry\'s been excluded. It will be most interesting to see what you do with Draco and Hermione, especially since she\'s now on her own. Poor Severus must be going out of his mind... he wanted her to discontinue the charm, but as the proverb says... be careful what you wish. I can imagine that Harry\'s going spare as well... I wonder what the slumber party gang will do.
person Eddie the Black Maru
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH a clifie!!!! non non non non!!! Oh dear God that wasnt fair!!! PLEASE< PLEASE update soon, tomorrow, today, tonight just continue this masterpiece!!! Im even dreaming about it. Much love from, Eddie the Black Maru
person johnbobspongepants
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good and I am enjoying reading it very much. I cried so badly during the last chapter - Poor Draco! Please post more soon!
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco crying? Never did I think I\'d see the day, poor little love. Oh my god, Severus is going to be going bazerk, he wont know why he cant comunicate with Hermione anymore, and if thats not an incentive for him to find a way out I dont know what is. I am so happy that you have got another chapter out, I dont think I was ever that quick at updating, maybe when I start my next story I should take a leaf out of your book and get cracking. lol. See you in my next review. xx
person Lu LIng Qi
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All thats needed to be said is WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoo