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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person Bambu
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So he\'s back, and he\'s going to make sure she takes care of herself, isn\'t he. Now it seems to me that Draco and Harry now know that Hermione\'s parents aren\'t dead, but they can\'t mention it to anyone really because wouldn\'t they have to reveal how they found out? The lead in to their kiss was beautifully done... so much desire and restraint that it was almost tangible. A lovely, lovely chapter.
person Sabine
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Your write some of the most erotic scenes I have ever read! Please update soon!
person Killer Angel
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a nice surprise! I was actually rereading this story... and suddenly there was another chapter!

yay.

thanks so much! can\'t wait until the next update...

but I gues I\'ll have to. ;-)
person auror853
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Can\'t wait for the next update! Keep up the great writing!
person Killer Angel
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story really is so incredible. When I started to read it when you first posted it, I didn\'t think it was going to have much of a plot. I thought it was going to be one of those \"let\'s throw Hermione and Severus into close quarters and have them go at it\" plotless ones... don\'t get me wrong, those can be great too ;-)... but this has such a good plot. It\'s very well developed and wonderfully written. I love this story so much. I can\'t wait for the next update.

(P.S....I love that song too! I have the CD. lol. :) yay for the goo goo dolls.)
person Poison Ivy
schedule March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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person Magical Ma
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!!--I had left off @ chapter 26 a few months ago & ran across your story again & I love what you\'ve done. You have managed to combine humor along with the sespense & angst--and keeping the characters true. I look forward to your future updates.
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW DARE he interupt her morning caffeine!!! hope she loves him as much as we think, if my man tried that on me, pregnant or not, he\'dbe looking from the wrong side of some serious hexing!!
person Eddie
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH you delightful little minx! that was brilliant!!! please please please please update as fast as your fingers can type!!! I want to see what happens to Snape and Hermione*hint hint* and Draco and Harry *hint hint* ahhhh....*squees with happiness* you have truly made my day, now update soon! I love to have wonderful days the like only ya can bring....now I think I\'ll re read it....
Much Love,
Eddie the Black Maru
person Tourniquette
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For some reason, I really, really enjoyed this chapter, inconsequential as it was itn the scheme of things. Brava!