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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person liz
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, please write more
person lisa
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WoW
person Sammy
schedule April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to post an other chapter for this story? I\'ve been waiting for quite some time now and nothing shows up... Is this chapter the last one? You didn\'t say it is and I hope it\'s not because your fic is one of the best I\'ve ever read (if not the best). Thx for sharing your talent with us!
person liz
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
write more please
And Soon if you dont mind

It is fenominal
person PippatheMouse
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly lovely! I had seen this fic for a while and was put off by the summary, thinking it would just be about Hermione, torture and dungeon cells. How happy I am that I took a look finally. Very enjoyable, I liked Snape\'s house, the love scene, Slytherin!Snape, every scene with Hermione-Severus dialogue, and their tentative, caring and loving relationship. As you can see I like alot of things! I\'m very much looking forward to reading more, and please, an epilogue of H & S with their child/ren. Lovely. :-)
person nymphadora
schedule March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! You are an awesome writer and you are really, really good at creating suspense - I spent all day at school today itching to come home and see what happened to Snape. But sigh, now I\'ve finished this chapter...I really can\'t wait until you update again! (This isn\'t the end of the story, is it? Because that would make me very sad :( ) I love your descriptions of Hermione\'s and Severus\'s feelings - its not over the top, but it really captures that nervous feeling of being in love - so romantic! And I think you\'ve really got a handle on Snape\'s character and motivations. Lots of people scoff at H/S pairings, but they should read your story, you make the progression seem very natural and sensible. Please update soon, I\'m addicted!
person lysa1
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such an enjoyable story. It has got everything a story needs; suspension, love, humour...
Good plot, I did not see the Draco/Harry pairing coming until it was too late ;-)

When you have finished this, I sincerely hope that you
person Sarah
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love the story, really really love the chapter. So sweet... made all of the waiting for the sweetness worth it. I almost just don\'t need any smut. Ok, so maybe I shouldn\'t go thaaat far. :) But anyway, the plot is great and very interesting, too. You have done a good job managing to meld everything together into a cohesive, great story! Can\'t wait to read more, update soon! Please? Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such an awesome fic. i don\'t know what else to say. i spent most of the day avoiding hw, and reading this on break. its a great fic. i anxiously look forward to more.
person Eddie the Black Maru
schedule March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was GLORIOUS. keep it up, dear god, please keep it up!!!!!!!
Much love
Eddie