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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person Carol
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really liked this story so far, but was really disappointed with this chapter. I hoped that Hermione and Severus would explain their assumptions to each other. I hope they will soon. But mostly I couldn\'t believe he treated her like that or that even part of her felt that it was okay. I can understand her physically reacting to it, but it sounded as though she was emotionally fighting to think that it was bad. I hope I am wrong. Keep writing though. I look forward to an update.
person Nobis_Solum_Non
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story, pelase update quickly for me!
person Alex
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great! He\'s so possesive. I like him that way.
person Bambu
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very pleased to see that you haven\'t elected to take the \'happiness and light\' road with this story. Severus inability to communicate clearly when his emotions are involved is fairly well documented in canon, and you\'ve extrapolated it to good purpose here. Hermione\'s reacting with all the understandable emotionally-charged lack of experience we know that she has -- despite being quite bright. And your Draco... well done. Let\'s hope there\'s a little room for his eventual improvement.
person Evil Arachnead
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Luvin\' it! Keep going!!
~Evil^^
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay, another chappie!loving it.keep it up
person Evil Arachnead
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*pokes* so whens the next update? this is good!
~Evil ^^
person Beth Ashkevron
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
_Please_ tell me when this is being updated! _Please?_
person jessica
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh please don\'t leave us hanging like that. ugh, why can\'t they be together?keep it going, all right!
person Carol
schedule December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really heart-breaking chapter. I want so much for both of them not to feel alone. This is a really great story. I look forward to reading more. I hope you are able to continue updating with frequency.