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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person Carol
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gack! How can you stop there?! I feel like throwing my computer. I want to run after Severus myself, but for obvious reasons don\'t know where to reach him at the moment to explain the misunderstanding which is currently driving me crazy and preventing sleep. Okay, maybe I\'m over-reacting a little, but I do hope you update really, really soon. Thanks for writing, as always.
person Sabine
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story, even though I just want to shake Severus and Hermione sometimes and tell them to sit down and have a good talk! LOL Seriously though, great story! And please, please write a happy ending, there\'s just too much bad stuff going on right now, we need something good. :-)
person killlisandra
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don\'t kill you? you ended it there! How can I not kill you? Please put another chapter in; does Snape die? Does Hermoine get with Potter? *cringes* i hope not; a perfectly good waste of a man if you ask me; always thought he was gay. Come on, give us dying fans a chapter, the waiting is unbearable....*pouts* i\'ll be extra good...well, maybe *smiles*
person stacy
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i cried while reading this latest chapter. you write beautifuly and keep it up. don\'t u dare leave us on this cliffy for to long!
person pinky
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You\'re about to make me cry. In fact my eyes are watering. *Sniff* damn harry for being there. I want more please.
person lysa1
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not much to say about that...Exellent. More!
person DRAGON-ELF
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhh!!!!! You are so cuel to stop the story there!!!! here i am ..hanging on the edge of my seat and then nothing!!!!! On a brighter note your story is fabulous and i cant wait to read more!!!

dragon-elf
person LuLingQi
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You can not leave it like that, are you mad, write the next chapter before i go insane! Oh God it just ends like that! I know i am being over critical but still.....
person Bambu
schedule December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent cliffhanger when Severus says goodbye to Hermione. Utterly heartbreaking. You\'ve balanced the lightheartedness of Hermione\'s day with the utter despair of Severus\' to very, very good effect. I will look for your next chapter eagerly.
person Bubsdragon
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is amazing. I laughed my head of a the Dirty Dancing part because I was listening to the soundtrack. Lol. I really love how this is, both of them have been kept in character. Although I would like to smack them both sometimes. Snape jealous. Not suprised really. Heck Ron was also jealous of Harry, so I should have seen that coming. Great Job
Update soon please, my sanity depends on it
Bubsdragon
aka Bubs