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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person alianne
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is wonderful. i want to find out if draco is overall bad or good... and of course what is going to happen to sev. well please update soon!
person Lu LIng Qi
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am very proud very proud and i still want more i am a very greedy person and this story is just to good.
person anon
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THANKS! more more more!
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is such a beautiful story. Questions questions questions. Does Severus love her back? Will he return? i can\'t wait to read the next chapter, please say it will be soon. xxx
person Sabine
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so quickly, please keep the chapters coming! :-) I\'m sitting on pins and needles! LOL
person purply
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...................update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~Purply
person LuLingQi
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the metion and the message amd i hope the next chapter comes soon because once again you have left me wanting more!
person Klink
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...gosh! ::Tears stream down face:: Omg, omg, omg... Tahts so sweet, yet to sad... Its hard to get me to cry, but this did it. I\'m normally the kind of person (I guess taht\'s why I always get Snape in quizzes all the time O.o) who always bottles up their feelings. If I feel joy, I usally keep it do myself and hardly smile. I never grin. I am verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry short tempered, though no-one would know that, because I am very good at controling and supressing my anger, as well as sadness. And oh...my...gosh... This actually got me to cry... I MUST read the next chapter! NOW! Before I cry more!

(BTW: This fic is AWESOME!)
person Klink
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO! He HAS to confess! He HAS to tell her he loooooooves her! NOOOOOOOOO!!!!! NO!! Severus Can\'t be fired!!!!! ::Tears come to eyes:: At least not untill Hermione knows! Oh gosh...I feel like I\'m watching an NC-17 rated soap oprah... do they even have those? O.o A-nywho, where was I? Right... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :\'(

(BTW: Brilliant as ever! :D)
person Bambu
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two terrifically tense cliffhangers in a row! Bravo! You did it with commendable ease. Obviously he wasn\'t in her rooms long enough to have heard her tell Harry that she was in love with \'the greasy git.\' How very sad for Severus, how very bleak his outlook. You\'ve done a good job of their miscommunications, and I just wonder how close to the end you are here, you seem to be ramping up to the climactic battle, which is interesting considering the secondary battle between Severus and Hermione will probably come afterwards. As always, I look forward to a new chapter.