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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person Sphinx
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sheer brilliance. If it weren\'t for copyright laws and such I would suggest publishing this. Very impressive. The plots and subplots are well drawn, and you are nicely descriptive. The characters are taken exactly as they were from the series, a feat few can say they have accomplished. I have to commend also your creativity with various parts of the story, as well as your ability to incorporate various small tidbits from JKRs books. A job well done, and I absolutely can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon. it\'s awesome
person angela
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story. it\'s very fresh and exciting. jw... but where did ron go?
person Shinohime
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Evil Grin* Very nice... I can\'t wait for the \"get together\" could you just have one small drunken kiss between Harry and Draco?? PLEASE?? It would light up my day...
person Bambu
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was very happy to see you post your most recent chapters. I confess that I look for your story often.
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<*I> Theres your italics Bold is the same thing but with a \'B\' and Underline with a \'U\'
person Anon
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<...I> Take out all the ....\'s
person koriandrkitten
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love how you portray Snape in this. He\'s soft but still the same snarky bastard. Please update soon!
person ChevyBaby
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing. I\'ve spent the whole day reading it from the beginning... I just couldn\'t stop. Please, please update soon :o)
person Petitchao
schedule January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are driving me insane, update already! PLEASE!