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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person yulia
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is fantastic update quick cant wait to read more...
person Tourniquette
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are evil cliffhangers, and then there is Chpater 29.

*tries very hard not to throttle the author* :)
person Innogen
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooops! How is she going to get out of this one! Glad to see the story is back! Great Chapter!
Innogen
person Eloradanin
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG !!! keep going I was laughing so hard I was crying...love the story ^__^ update very soon!!!!!!
person Nique
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was the best chapter. I can\'t believe Draco asked her about her first time. Please update soon
person Anon
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Flame you fot that kiss? Hardly. Not only would Draco and Harry make an interesting twist to the story, maybe Draco could be inspired to help rescue Snape. of course Harry and Hermione would have to work fast.
person lovethelab
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great party - How come I never had fun ones like that??? maybe not enough alcohol! Love the Severus in the head commentary that is going on. At least he can feel some love and have fun in Hermione\'s head. How scary that Draco is asking about Hermione\'s first time! Especially with the extra voice in her head!
person Aleksandra
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing, proper development of story and all the good stuff.

I can\'t wait to see more of this fanfic, it\'s gorgeous!

~Alik
person NobisSolomNon
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapters! I can\'t wait for more.
person yamihikari
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the story! ^o^=
Please! PLEASE continue the story and tell me when u update!
thankyou!

You are a great writer