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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person ChevyBaby
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you! Another chapter and one with such a sweet ending too. I adore Hermione & Severus but it\'s even better with a bit of Draco & Harry dropped into the mix... *copious amounts of drool*
person Kaye
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You\'ve got to be kidding me!!!! You can\'t just leave it there! I\'m gonna go crazy wondering what the hell happens!!! Anyway, this is an amazing story and I love it! So keep up the great work and update soon! Otherwise I might go insane....;_
person LunaMoon
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! How dare you! evil evil person....stupid cliffhangers...Hmm, Draco in a room full of matresses..can\'t say that I would mind lol.
person Tourniquette
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only throttle authors when they give up or delete their fics, so you\'re safe...for now. Mwahahahahaaaaaa.

I think the cheekiness between Malfoy and the others was great, and him mistaking the acronym for venereal diseases for Dvd\'s was fantastic.

I was a bit confused at the end of the chapter as to the \"blocking\" if you will, or placement of the characters in terms of physical locations. Were Hermione and Harry in her room, alone, and she stomped out to the mattress where Draco found her, or did Draco sneak into her room and touch her on the floor while she was sobbing there?

This is so addictive.
person yulia
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the chapter , update quick xxx
person lovethelab
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that got Snape\'s attention didn\'t it! But the promise at the end was very sweet. I wanted to find out what the boys were talking about - - and who finds out about Hermione\'s condition next!
person anijade
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well wow I am really enjoying this please don\'t leave us hanging for long
person NobisSolomNon
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update soon! I can\'t wait to read more.
person LunaMoon
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can honestly say that I love it and that I want more. You hear me?! MORE SOON!!! *tear* The anticipation is killing me! Will he be rescued? Will Draco turn to good? GAH! so many questions, so little time.
person WickedlyWanton
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree, you do deserve a review, but not just because you were nice and quick about it. I think you did an excellent job with this chapter, and I commend you on the ongoing quality of your work. Thanks for the update!