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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person Tourniquette
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really sweet chapter, and a nice save from total humiliation for Hermione. While I think thereare several elements of this story that are either ooc or have some flaw in them, the characaters are believable in what they do, and to me, that is what matters the most. I can read this and not cringe, but actually enjoy the plotline.
person cc
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh thats great. Can\'t wait to read more
person lydia
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost felt like crying when i read this chapter. You have to have sympthy for them and hope everything will work out. I can\'t wait for more updates to come. This is one of my favorite stories.
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(All excited at another update so soon). You will never know how much I love this story. I wouldnt mind having Severus in my head. lol. Does she come up with a plan to get him out soon? Did I mention that I really love this story? lol. xx
person semperputus
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Begging for reviews? Sweet fluff I like it and Ron was sweet thanks for that I hope he does get angry and hurt latter you make him see sense quickly they like to make Ron a sulky git but I think he is too loyal to be upset for long and he realises she doesn\'t love him. It might hurt but i hope his friendship wins out in the end
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... my first ever marriage proposal! -dances- teehee I can\'t believe how quickly you are updating! This is getting to be a very intriguing story (not like it wasn\'t from the beginning). That Newt Semen part was so great. -giggles- I can only imagine. It woulda been funny if they couldn\'t get it up cause of that stuff. lmao Imagine, Lucius getting ready to rape some victim and she would start laughing at him cause hes limp. -rolls on the floor laughing manically- Goodness, but he does deserve something of the sort. I must say I am quite interested to learn what Draco will have to say to Hermione about her little rant. Wasn\'t too smart on her part, I suppose horomones do that to you. I also can\'t help being curious as to what was said between the boys behind closed doors. Anyways, fantastic job (as usual...). You make me sick you write so well. lol I can\'t wait to hear from you soon!
person pinkyheather
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting so good. but I wish they\'d rescue Severus already. Ohhh I hate cliffies. More soon please.
person Eloradanin
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please tell me she\'s going to get him out of there T__T please update real soon
person Sammy
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is just great! It\'s one of the best I\'ve ever read! Look forward to more soon! :D
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better! As soon as I saw the new chapter the other day I dropped everything and sat down to read it, then this morning another appears! It\'s like Christmas all over again! You really do have some talent. I thought the Harry/Draco exchange was hilarious, and the fact they might have enjoyed it. -giggles maliciously- *wonders when everyone will begin to notice Hermione\'s pregnancy and if they will find out who the father is* Anyways, keep up the awesome work, I look forward to reading your next installment in the future.