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for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

by Gothic

person NobisSolomNon
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, two in one day? Happy valentines. I just want you to know that in my time of grief over a good friend\'s passing I turned to this story to pick me up a bit. It helped. My friend died today, and this story helped, you should be proud.
person Lyndie578
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you turned the worm quite nicely. I guess the cat\'s out of the bag now. Question is, how will Draco handle this? What\'s in it for Draco?
person Tourniquette
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeet. Please tell me he\'s found a way to Floo her to Malfoy Manor. Things would be SO much more interesting then.... *cackles*
person SpiritOfLupin
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know that before the last chapter I\'ve been a little naughty and not reviewing (blushes), I\'ve given myself a good kick up the arse for it and hope to make it a regular thing from now on. Anyway, I love this story, especially the little conversations between Severus and Hermione, some of them really crease me up. Sometimes I even laugh out loud and scare the bejesus out of my husband. I couldnt believe it when Hermione started shooting her mouth off at the end of the last chapter and Malfoy heard her, my jaw literally dropped. I get the distinct feeling that he doesnt really want to go through with the whole turn-Hermione-over-to-the-dark-side thing, but maybe I\'m wrong, it wouldnt be the first time. Lol, crack on Sev, not only is he going to knock the evil ones out with the sleeping potion but hes making them impotent as well, nice action. Maybe you could also work into the story him giving them all a heafty kick in the knackers while they sleep. No? alright then, but its a nice thought. Looking forward to your next chapter and seeing what Malfoy has to say about Hermiones little outburst. May your muse be with you. xx
person MeToo2
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the stroy its got great twists and the whole premise is excelent. I don\'t think this has been done before and ive been reading fanfiction for over three years. Some elements are borrowed but other than that its yours. hope to see the rest can\'t wait to find out what happens to Malfoy and Severus and Harry for that matter, please don\'t make then gay ive read to many stories that went down the drain that way but if you can find a way to make it work hey, all the power to you.

person destiny black
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, but you were missing alot of puncuation. i was very confused about the conversations that were going on between severus and hermione.any chane of draco turning out good?
person Kate McGuire
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just ran into this fic and read all 31 chapters. It is truely surperb. I hope you update again soon. I think you do a very good job of writing Snape. Hermione also.
person Eddie
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bloody fair of ya! you is evils for doing that! that was one of the worst clifs...im laying here growling at ya in antipication for the new chapie. for the love of
kami, update soon, put us poor unfortunate souls out of our misery. may the nine oversee thee, much love from Eddie the Black Maru
person Lu Ling Qi
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are evil i hope and by hope i mean you better update soon! so help me if you don\'t! pls pls i beg of you UPDATE!!!
person carly
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh cliffhanger