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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 8 - I still think she should tell him about seeing Malfoys in Knockturn Alley and how she was inexplicably drawn to follow them.
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
I really loved this chapter! I think it's wonderful the way you're making Snape somehow, but still not completely out of character.
I wonder who that man dressed in black was, perhaps Lucius? I hope he didn't hurt her too bad.
I'll be looking forward to your next great chapter!
Love Leonora.
I really loved this chapter! I think it's wonderful the way you're making Snape somehow, but still not completely out of character.
I wonder who that man dressed in black was, perhaps Lucius? I hope he didn't hurt her too bad.
I'll be looking forward to your next great chapter!
Love Leonora.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well - I'm glad to be able to help you with PWP thing :o)
So she followed the Malfoy's down Knockturn Alley, now did she? I wonder if she somehow recognizes Lucius without realizing it... could be another clue that Voldemort might have something to do with her showing up at the headquarters.
I'll be waiting for you next chapter.
Love Leonora.
So she followed the Malfoy's down Knockturn Alley, now did she? I wonder if she somehow recognizes Lucius without realizing it... could be another clue that Voldemort might have something to do with her showing up at the headquarters.
I'll be waiting for you next chapter.
Love Leonora.
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 7 - nice development. I hope she at least tells Severus about following the blond man and Draco; it will help Severus figure out what happened to her if he knows the Malfoys might have been involved, and that she might have hidden memories of Lucius.
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really wonderful chapter! I like the way you're making Snape somehow vulnerable, but not too soft or weak. I will be looking very much forward to see things developing between the two of them. And by the way... I wouldn't call this a PWP... it does have a plot! And a very interesting one!
I'll be waiting for your next update :o)
Love Leonora.
I'll be waiting for your next update :o)
Love Leonora.
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November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 6 - oh, just kill that Sirius! Such a prat, still acting like he was a schoolboy. BTW, how old is Yuki? I know she is described as a "girl" but that doesn't tell us if she's Hermione's age or what. I wish Dumbledore would scold Sirius for being mean to Severus, even if it's Sirius' house.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your story! I am still very curiuos about the girl, and I'm curious about what's going to happen between her and Snape! Please update soon.
Love Leonora.
Love Leonora.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 4 - okay, so why don't they use Veritaserum? This is sort of a cliffhanger - does Severecorecognize her? I'm glad at least Molly is nice to Severus.
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November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I can't believe you ended this at such a good part! You are such a good writer and I need more!!! Severus!!!
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really curious to find out more about this girl! And I hope Snape gets into the picture soon :o)
Keep up the good work Leo Leonora
Keep up the good work Leo Leonora