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by MistressLupin

person June
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 11 - I wonder if Severus or Poppy Pomfrey can figure out how old the scar is on her back. That would tell them when the event happened, maybe help identify her age better too.
person June
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 13 - ooh, I just hate that Sirius!! I hope Yuki and Severus just force themselves to go through her memories. I think they should take a photo of Yuki\'s \"MS\" mark on her back, show it to folks who might recognize it, maybe some Aurors.
schedule December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on Lara, you can\'t keep us in suspense. We need a new chapter!!! haha thanks great job!!!
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Lara!

Great to see you publishing again! This was another great chapter.

So Snape just ran out the door like that! He\'d better come back soon! I\'d love to see things developing between the two of them. And I\'m still very curious to know more about Yuki.

Love Leonora.
person BabyJane
schedule November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just started to read this story and ir sounds like it\'s getting good, Hurry up and another chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god! So excellent!
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Lara!

This was a very nice chapter! I like the way things are developing between Yuki and Severus. Too bad Tonks had to walk in the room just then! :o)

I wonder what that M and S means. M could be Malfoy, but then what would S mean?? I\'m very curious, and I hope you update soon.

And thanks for reviewing my story! I\'m glad you like it.

I\'ll have a look at your new Lucius story some time. It sounds quite interesting!

Love Leonora.
schedule November 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories!! I loved them since i saw one on Quizilla. You are an amazing writer keep this up!!

<3 Sanjora
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Two new chapters! Lovely! I feel so sorry for Snape, he needs someone to confide in just as much as Yuki does. I hope things start developing between them soon... I was wondering, if she started having feelings for him, would he be able to see it in her mind??

Can\'t wait for your next chapter!

Love Leonora.
schedule November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She likes him, Severus is different from all the other people in the Harry Potter books that's what I like about him.