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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 15 - I hope she doesn\'t mind what Severus tells her about his past - she has probably \"seen\" enough through their previous sessions to know he\'s a complex man. Also, she can see now that he\'s very caring about her. Thanks for the update!
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December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Another sweet love-scene! I absolutely loved it! You have a way with words you know :o) The way you\'re describing it is very sensuous and touching. I say well done!
And thanks for the mention :o)
I think (hope) she will be understanding about his past.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Love Leonora.
And thanks for the mention :o)
I think (hope) she will be understanding about his past.
Looking forward to your next chapter.
Love Leonora.
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was so good Lara!
So they finally gave in to each other. Hah! If only Sirius knew about that, huh? Well, he will probably find out sooner or later.
Looking forward to you next chapter.
Love Leonora.
So they finally gave in to each other. Hah! If only Sirius knew about that, huh? Well, he will probably find out sooner or later.
Looking forward to you next chapter.
Love Leonora.
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!...Can\'t wait till the next one!!
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! You\'ve outdone yourself! Chapter 14 rocked! Chapter 13 rocked! Chapter 12 Rocked! Chapter...11-1 ROCKED! Your quizilla quizzes are awesome, but this story is...wow. Perhaps next chapter you\'ll reveal a little more about Yuki?? I\"ll be checking back to your page often!
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She\'s in love with Severus, I don\'t think it would matter about his past.
Though Sirius would try to make her think the past counts, but its in the past it doesn\'t matter anymore.
Though Sirius would try to make her think the past counts, but its in the past it doesn\'t matter anymore.
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, but I doubt everyone else isn\'t going to like it much.
He should just flee with her to Hogwarts.
He should just flee with her to Hogwarts.
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - oops, they forgot to put locking and silencing charms on the door... I hope this doesn\'t mess things up for them later!
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there Lara!
Another great chapter! I really love your story! Poor Severus! I\'m so glad that Yuki went after him. Looking very much forward to their talk about that kiss, and what it might lead to (??) You\'re doing such a great job on your story. I\'ll be waiting for your next chapter!
Love Leonora.
Another great chapter! I really love your story! Poor Severus! I\'m so glad that Yuki went after him. Looking very much forward to their talk about that kiss, and what it might lead to (??) You\'re doing such a great job on your story. I\'ll be waiting for your next chapter!
Love Leonora.
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks aren\'t everything, Sirius is awful mean to Severus.