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for Blue Eyed Dragon

by PrincessLizzie

person Ivy
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww! wow, this story is so cute!!!!

I absolutely love it. Can\'t wait to see what happens next! I hope everything turns out fine in the end. Keep up the good work.

~Ivy
person lady
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
boy you sure no how too leave your readers hanging. I am a new reader and your storie is great. hope you update soon.
person cottoncandy
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Draco better say yes!

Love the story! Update soon!!!!
person Raelyn
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really good fic, i like it alot although whats the deal with the death eaters? what happened that would be a good thing to explain you know? maybe in an epilouge or something like that, again very good *hands some berty botts every flavor beans over to you* lol later dayz,
~Raelyn!~
person JJ
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.K. You want a review? Great story! I like reading it a lot. I have a question though. In chapter 8, Harry and Draco return from their date, Draco confesses all, and Harry put him in bed. How does it go from putting him in bed to him being only in boxers? Are they close enough that Draco stripped down to his underwear in front of Harry after their first date? I didn\'t notice anything about his taking off most of his clothes yet when the INTERESTING - HOT scene begins, Harry only has to pull down Draco\'s boxers. And if Harry only took off his shoes to sleep, how did he get naked to shag???? A quick line dropped here or there would fill in those blanks and add to the foreplay. Other than that, and the occasional error from server transcription malfunctions, you and your cousin have one fine story that I\'m now going back to reading!!!!!!!
person Loni
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on! Talk about a cliffhanger man!
person sharon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You remind me of the waitress that is royally pissed off that I didn\'t leave a tip. Gosh, gone are the days that you give a tip because the service was so special and now we get to pay the restaurant employees what the employers should be paying them anyway. So. perhaps, if you could stop interrupting the story and turning everyone off as you dog constantly for reviews you just might get them. Spend some time worrying about how you can become more innovative in your writing and perhaps you could actually bring us back to the time of wizards and witches and mystical things where the impossible happens everyday.
person JJ
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I worship you (and your Beta)!!!!!

Please don\'t stop this story! I read Harry/Draco regularily and this fic only just showed up in the latest category. Besides, if it has over three thousand hits, SOMEBODY BESIDES ME must be reading it!!!

I love the fluff, and the sex. How could they spend 2 years together? Alone??? Without the internet????????
And Harry STILL wants to marry him? It must be true love. When do we find out that Narcissa (or her mother) sent the death eaters after Draco for \"killing\" his father? And what about Narcissa? She could have tried to save Lucius as well. I bet she was being tortured by him all those years and went nuts after he died and its her mother that is getting even with Lucius by threatening Draco.

Besides, we have to find out the truth behind this evil plot. Please finish!!!
person Kat
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear that if you don\'t finish this fic I will find a way to hunt you down and torture you until you do....I am actually getting attached to it. I would be excessively dissapointed if you didn\'t complete this (preferably happily ever after *nudgenudge**winkwink*). I think that the whole things was very well thought out and I absolutely adore a fluffy romance every now and then. SO FINISH!!!! (Not that I mean to be rude)
Thank you very much and keep on writing!
person vinchildy
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your story. please update soon i dying to know if draco said yes.