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OMG, lol, I wanted a wedding cake like that! (well, a chocolate one anyways. I\'d have chocolate icing too! ^.^ Wedding cake is so skanky otherwise)

Anyways, can\'t wait fot the next chapter.

Great job again! Love the wedding preparations.

The cake sounds unique! I would have never thought to use Dragons but I see why they did. I can\'t wait for chapter 16!

the chapter was great

I just thought I would respond to your ardent requests for reviews. I may not be getting this right but like a tip at a restaurant it should be because to you the experience was so memorable that you just had to stop and let that person know that they had made your dining experience special. Now of course times have perverted that idea where restaurants no longer have to pay their help as they should and restaurant personal just can\'t properly get by without actually expecting us to pay a certain amount of percentage of the bill in tips. The same holds true on story writing. Authors seems to think that a whole lot of reviews is just ducky. I am sure that I would not as a author want to see a whole lot of them because I would be too busy writing my next chapter and trying to have a life as well. I would want my reviews to be good critisism about the story, and I would tell people right up front that I would be taking no suggestions as how I wrote my story as far a personal preference or the storyline was concerned. Sometimes an author writes a good story but not exceptional or anything out of the norm that you have either seen or gotten the feel of before, and with all the stories out there I would think that that would be probably one of the biggest challenges out there. It doesn\'t mean that the story wasn\'t good, but that it wasn\'t anything mind boggling. As all things that we sometimes deem terrible it has its upside. In effect when you are lucky to write that exceptional story and with your writing, its just a matter of time, then I have a feeling you will know right away that your really on to something. So don\'t loose heart my friend and just write a story that your proud to have produced and don\'t sweat the small stuff and heck just think of all the spare time you will have because you won\'t have to go through all sorts of prattle about how wonderful you are and how we think your great , yada yada yada, heck you already know that yourself and don\'t need us to tell you that , Im sure.

great chapter

I review! Please update? lol

The wedding sounds perfect! Small, elegant.... I love it! Can\'t wait for chapter 15!

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 14!

I really really really really really love this story and I sincerely hope that you will decide to keep posting on this site.

Crys