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by psychocatblah

schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This storywas well writyen but not my cup of tea. I'd like to borrow a few ideas and turn it into a different light. I'll accredit you in the author's notes. I don't knwow whether or not you'll get this, but if you do send me a message if you don't want me to. otherwise...
person Shiruy
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was disgusting. Brilliant, but definitely disgusting. (I admire your ability to write things like that... >.< *would be unable to finish such a story, simply because she would get sick*)
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
0_0 That was a bit disturbing, honestly.
person ailene
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeewww........I guess somebody had to write it, thank you for not leaving it to me. Very well-written, honestly, just kinda squicky. *shudders* I'm sorry, it's just that I once had to fish a worm out of my vagina after a particularly vigorous leaf-pile fight (where I was getting handfuls of wet, bug-ridden leaves shoved down my pants) and to add this.....a rat??!!!!! Eugh!
-jo
person Can I obliviate now?
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing... very disturbing.
person ksevfansd
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In the words of Ron (movie or book-I am not sure which)..."You know you are scary sometimes, brilliant, but scary!" (I may not have gotten it exactly right) That was quite different. It was very well written. Don't ever stop surprising us.