rate_review Reviews

Ch 2 - ah, a cliffhanger! Hmm, maybe he should just stun her and drag her back, tlet let Albus do all the talking. Why didn't Albus give him a portkey so they could travel faster?

I can not exactly remember what I wrote for my revue last tim rem remember thinking, great start, how dare the
writing finish there, when we are know Severus is going to appear sometime.
WELL, we had are new chapter, (very good by the way), now we have finished exactly how thought the other chapter
would.

O.K, now what happens?, please update soon, I really need to know what happens.

Thanks for a brill fanfic, 5 stars (What else)

I can not exactly remember what I wrote for my revue last time, I remember thinking, great start, how dare the
writing finish there, when we are know Severus is going to appear sometime.
WELL, we had are new chapter, (very good by the way), now we have finished exactly how thought the other chapter
would.

O.K, now what happens?, please update soon, I really need to know what happens.

Thanks for a brill fanfic, 5 stars (What e eve

Good start. Why is it somehow I have a feeling that Hermione's date is never going to happen??? I hope you post the next part right away!
Innogen

Ch 1 - great start! I hope she doesn't argue and resist going back to Hogwarts; sounds pretty important for them to call her back. And I hope she doesn't go on this date!

[PS - when will you next update "A Marriage Made By Law"?]

That is so cruel, to post a story with a very good opening and then to leave it on a cliff edge.
And why did Severus do that in the first place.
O.k. already hooked, Please update soon, preverably lots of chapters at the same time.

Really good start can