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for Playing With Fire

by ldkelly

person Melissa
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please continue this story I'm hooked and only after one chapter. Oooh your good! I need to know what happens next, oh and please do it soon I hate to wait to long. Thanks!
person eve/roarke
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!! one of the best opening chapters I have ever read, just finished reading it and I am already
dying to know what happens.

You have to update soon, maybe even update all the story? well we readers can dream.

5 stars awarded.
person nicknack
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS THE BEST ONE-SHOT I HAVE EVER READ!!! I LOVE IT! WHAT WAS IN THE SECOND LETTER? was it the part when draco said he loves harry? or was it something else entirely? i must know!! i hope you make a sequel! did i spell that right? anyways, please write more for me! PLEASE! I WILL LOVE YOU FOR EVER AND EVER IF YOU DO!
LOVE HUGS AND KISSES FROM YOUR NICKNACK,
.....NICKNACK!!!.... HEEHEEHHEE!
person Emerald*Dragon
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Lol* I love the fact that u made Harry hate Albus in this story, and the whole 'Draco never hating Harry' thing. Pleaze write more.

Emerald*Dragon
person Night
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hells yes you need to write a sequel!!! What kind of an eg isg is that?!!! I mean you leave us without saying what the key is, whether or not it works, and whether or not Harry and Drake get to be together!!! Are you trying to drive us to an early death?!!! Or are you just trying to make me go bald?!!! I mean seriously, come on, that's just cruel!!! Cruel and unusual if I do say so!!! Its such a sweet story, yet at the same time, so sad, and so intense!!! I lUV EET!!! Please, please, please, please write a sequel or at least another part to this story, or just add onto this story and add in certain parts!! Don't leave those of us who hate 'not knowing' on the edge!! I beg ya!
person delphyne
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write a sequel! I loved it! I am not always a big fan of Harry still hating Dumbledore. But, i don't care in this case. Not really. Just want Harry and Draco to be happy and together. Let the war end, and NO killing Draco or Harry. K?
person Abby
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ogh!
Very good story, hey if there is a sequel I will read it!
Loved the angst and the smut...
loved your portrayals of Harry and Draco!
person WretchedScar
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Give me more story! Give me more story!! This is so wicked great! Update soon please!

Thanks,
Wretched
person EmeraldGrey
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you SO do NOT need to lower yourself by begging for reviews.
trust me, they will come!
Very good characterization, very vivid descriptions too!
Angsty as HELL, (yummy) so I love IT!
oh, and Draco looks HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
Wow! Others need to read this!! it's well wrote!
Don't wanna ruin it for the rest, just, write more, please?
MORE!
Em
person thrnbrooke
schedule November 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I keep reading this and each time it is even better then the last! I can't wait for more!